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Some students tend to play computer games rather than do sports. Why is this? What can be done to tackle this problem?

Nowadays, The Educational Institutions are promoting more importance in accordance with Physical Exercises, in-door and Out-door Activities in day-to-day basis. However, A minimum number of the enthusiastic learners are showing their interest towards Computer Games rather than playing in the play grounds. One should definitely need to be consider about their heath to promote successful life for later. In the undermentioned consignment, I will elaborate and emphasize my opinions based on the provided argument. The Financial Rewards as well as strengthened profile benifits can be awarded during the schooling to encourage the students to play sports. For instance, The Students can be rendered with additional marks for the sports in their academic curriculum. One shall, definitely, commence playing with foot ball or any interested game of their choice instead of using video games in smart phones or computer. Consequently, This Amazing start-up with new Activities will provides good health benifits for their later as well. The centralized legal bodies should introduce awareness programs for our national or state level games of our country. The Students, Admittedly, have a habit of watching advertisements and brochures in Televisions through Cartoons designes which is build by utilizing the effects of multimedia completely. As a result, These Methods will promote immediate reflection our their minds by providing great enhancement over the Real life sport tasks. On the other hand, The Nation would be able to retain back the crucial games in the in-direct Manner. In the Nutshell, The Young learners engaging with sports provides more befinits such as rich improvement over their physical fitness as well as great relaxation from Not interested scenarios. I would like to recommend to follow these strategies in field of Academics and politics. Eventually, An Individual will definitely concentrate on the sports. Further more, This challenge also can be mitigated in the easier way.

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in day-to-day basis. However
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Games
rather
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consider about their
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elaborate and emphasize my opinions based on the provided argument.

The Financial Rewards as well
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benifits
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 during the schooling to encourage the students to play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
. For instance
, The Students can be rendered
 with additional marks for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 in their academic curriculum. One shall, definitely, commence playing with The noun “football” is spelled as one word.football
foot ball
 or any interested game of their choice instead
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games
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smart phones
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computer
. Consequently
, This Amazing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
-up with new Activities will provides This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 health Possible spelling mistake found.benefits
benifits
 for their later Comparison requires “than”, not ‘then’ nor ‘as’.than
as
 well.

The centralized legal bodies should introduce awareness programs for our national or state level You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 of our country. The Students, Admittedly
, have a habit of watching advertisements and brochures in Televisions through Cartoons Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean “designs”, the plural form of the noun ‘design’?designsdesigneddesignerdesignersdesigneedesignees
designes
 which is build by utilizing the effects of multimedia completely. As a result
, These Methods will promote immediate reflection our their minds by providing great enhancement over the Real life You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
 tasks. On the other hand
, The Nation would be able to retain back the crucial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 in the in-direct Manner.

In the Nutshell, The Young learners engaging with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 provides more Possible spelling mistake found.definitedeficitsbefits
befinits
 such as rich improvement over their physical fitness as well
 as great relaxation from Not interested scenarios. I would like to The verb ‘recommend’ is used with the gerund form: “recommend following”.recommend following
recommend to follow
 these strategies in field of Academics and politics. Eventually
, An Individual will definitely concentrate on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
. This adverb is normally spelled as one word.Furthermore
Further more
, This challenge also
 can be mitigated
 in the easier way. 