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Some people think that art can be created only by talented / gifted people, while other disagree and think that anyone can create art. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Number of people believes that only talented or god gifted people have ability for the creation of art. I am partially disagreed with the above statement. According to me, every individual is an artist. Also every human being has their own talent and many of them even don’t know about their specialty. Firstly, everyone have to understand that what an art is. Basically, Art is an activity or skill of producing anything for instance, dancing, painting, design etc. Moreover, something that is created within imagination and skill and that expresses important ideas or feelings is called an Art. On the other hand, many other people think that anyone can create art but hard work is the most essential thing to become an artist. Hence, if individual have talent it doesn’t mean that person became an artist. Therefore, talented people may need less hard work to reach there, but they cannot reach the pinnacles of success without sufficient practice. In conclusion, practice makes the man perfect. Consequently, to survive in the industry, everyone have to put their effort and have to show something different which is unknown by people. Hence, it makes a person unique.
Number of
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people
believes that
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only
talented or god gifted
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people
have ability for the creation of
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art
. I am
partially
disagreed with the above statement.
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According to me
, every individual is an artist.
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Also
every human being has their
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own
talent and
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many
of them even don’t know about their specialty.

Firstly
, everyone
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have
to understand that what an
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art
is.
Basically
,
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Art
is an activity or
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skill
of producing anything
for instance
, dancing, painting, design etc.
Moreover
, something that
is created
within imagination and
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skill
and that expresses
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important
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ideas
or feelings
is called
an Art.

On the other hand
,
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many
other
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people
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think
that anyone can create
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art
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but
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hard
work is the most essential thing to become an artist.
Hence
, if individual have talent it doesn’t mean that person became an artist.
Therefore
, talented
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people
may need less
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hard
work to reach there,
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but
they cannot reach the pinnacles of success without sufficient practice.

In conclusion
, practice
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makes
the
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man
perfect.
Consequently
, to survive in the industry, everyone
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have
to put their effort and
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have to
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show
something
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different
which is unknown by
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people
.
Hence
, it
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makes
a person unique.
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IELTS essay Some people think that art can be created only by talented / gifted people, while other disagree and think that anyone can create art.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
194 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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