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Some students prefer to study on abroad,while others choose to study in their own country.Discuss both sides of the opinion.

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There is a universally acknowledged that a significant number of students are interested in learning English, therefore some of them can go to English speaking countries and learn with other students from over the world. However, most students though study in their own country is successful. In this essay, l would discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this opinion. First of all, if a student does not know the meaning of a word or understand the teacher, they can ask one of their classmates for help in their country. Furtheremore, student improve their vocabulary with learning by heart new words in their own country but if they are in English speaking place, they also practise and can not learn academic words. Secondly, the educator will understand what problem the class have with learning English and able to assist them with the things that they find most difficult. To illustrate, as l do not know English words, my repetutor teach grammar in our mother tongue, thus l am sure, l can study grammar quicker than other friends which are studying in english country. On the other hand, if students are shy or just lazy, they can speak their own language in the lesson all of the time and not communicate in English. Additionally, provided that pupils study in foreign countries, their speaking raise in high level because they communicate with different people thus the idea come fast and speak fast. Moreover, as long as they ask their friends for help too often, they will not increase their skills. To sum up, it can be helpful for students if they can get help from friends who speak the same language as they do. If the whole class speak the same first language, he or she can assist them with vocabulary and grammar. However, their speaking may not improve easily.
There is a
universally
acknowledged that a significant number of
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students
are interested
in learning English,
therefore
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some
of them can go to
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English speaking
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countries
and learn with other
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students
from over the world.
However
, most
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students
though study in their
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own
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country
is successful. In this essay, l would discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this opinion.
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First of all
, if a
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student
does not know the meaning of a
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word
or understand the teacher, they can ask one of their classmates for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in their
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country
.
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Furtheremore
,
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student
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improve
their vocabulary with learning by heart new words in their
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own
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country
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but
if they are in
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English speaking
place, they
also
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practise
and can not learn academic words.
Secondly
, the educator will understand what problem the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
have with learning English and able to assist them with the things that they find most difficult. To illustrate, as l do not know English words, my
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repetutor
teach grammar in our mother tongue,
thus
l am sure, l can study grammar quicker than other friends which are studying in
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english
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country
.
On the other hand
, if
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students
are shy or
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just
lazy, they can
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speak
their
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own
language in the lesson
Consider using "all the".
all of the
time and not communicate in English.
Additionally
, provided that pupils study in foreign
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countries
, their speaking raise in high level
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because
they communicate with
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different
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people
thus
the
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idea
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come
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fast
and
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speak
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fast
.
Moreover
, as long as they ask their friends for
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help
too
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often
, they will not increase their
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skills
. To sum up, it can be helpful for
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students
if they can
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get
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help
from friends who
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speak
the same language as they do. If the whole
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class
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speak
the same
first
language, he or she can assist them with vocabulary and grammar.
However
, their speaking may not
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improve
easily
.
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IELTS essay Some students prefer to study on abroad, while others choose to study in their own country.

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  American English
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307 words
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