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Some scientists think that there are intelligent forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some scientists think that there are intelligent forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. v. 3
Some scientists argue that there are life forms on other planets, while others claim that it will be a great threat to human existence. Although space exploration is in human’s nature, I tend to think that it may have a devastating effect on our planet. It is believed that contacting extraterrestrial life forms may be beneficial. Owing to the fact that natural resources are depleting, we could get alternative energy sources from them. Consequently, it would help us to solve the environmental issues. Another interesting view is that creatures on other planets may be technologically ahead of us. With their help, we could develop technologies on earth. In addition, we could have solved the mystery of the black hole due to the human’s drive to explore. Nevertheless, I believe that communicating with other planet life forms may have a destructive outcome on our existence on earth. To begin with, there is no proof that there is a life on other planets. Even if there are some extraterrestrial creatures, we do not know what their intentions are and how they might respond to contact from human civilization. Moreover, a great scientist, Stephen Hawking warned us saying: "If aliens visit us, the outcome would be much as when Columbus landed in America, which didn't turn out well for the Native Americans". He stated that humans would be better off doing everything they can to avoid contact, instead of trying to find and communicate with life in the cosmos. In conclusion, even though I believe there is a great desire of humans for the search for life beyond earth the fear that an advanced alien civilization would have no problem wiping out the human race outgrows it.
Some
scientists argue that there are
life
forms on
other
planets
, while others claim that it will be a great threat to
human
existence. Although space exploration is in
human’s
nature, I tend to
think
that it may have a devastating effect on our planet.

It
is believed
that contacting extraterrestrial
life
forms may be beneficial. Owing to the fact that natural resources are depleting, we could
get
alternative energy sources from them.
Consequently
, it would
help
us to solve the environmental issues. Another interesting view is that creatures on
other
planets
may be
technologically
ahead of us. With their
help
, we could develop technologies on earth.
In addition
, we could have solved the mystery of the black hole due to the
human’s
drive to explore.

Nevertheless
, I believe that communicating with
other
planet
life
forms may have a destructive outcome on our existence on earth. To
begin
with, there is no proof that there is a
life
on
other
planets
. Even if there are
some
extraterrestrial creatures, we do not know what their intentions are and how they might respond to contact from
human
civilization.
Moreover
, a great scientist, Stephen Hawking warned us saying:
"
If aliens visit us, the outcome would be much as when Columbus landed in America, which didn't turn out well for the Native Americans
"
. He stated that
humans
would be better off doing everything they can to avoid contact,
instead
of trying to find and communicate with
life
in the cosmos.

In conclusion
,
even though
I believe there is a great desire of
humans
for the search for
life
beyond earth the fear that an advanced alien civilization would have no problem wiping out the
human
race outgrows it.
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IELTS essay Some scientists think that there are intelligent forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous.

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