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Some scholars believe that as computers translate quickly and accurately, learning a foreign language is a waste of time. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the era of modernization and computerization, computers have become a contributor to translating foreign languages rapidly and exactly. Although I believe that these advanced technologies will meet some needs of humans in translating languages, I totally disagree with the idea that studying foreign languages is unnecessary. On the one hand, there are several advantages of using translation softwares. Firstly, it only takes a few seconds to translate via computers. Nowadays, there are a wide range of usable translation apps and within a portable device, people can translate words whenever they want in a little amount of time. Unlike in the past, there was a need of traditional dictionaries to translate other languages to their mother tongue and vice versa, which was time-consuming and inconvenient. Secondly, thanks to the advance of technology, people can save a large amount of money because they do not need to hire interpreters anymore, which of course will cost them a great deal. Instead, they can utilise their computers to translate new words by themself. On the other hand, people could not reliant on computer translations due to some drawbacks. First of all, the translation devices are not always comprehensively accurate. This is due to the fact that these applications, in general, can only translate word-by-word and may overlook the context of sentences. Therefore, with academic paragraphs, learners may not be offered a correct translation, which can detrimentally affect their demands. Another point to note is that using these equipments may disrupt their conversations. To illustrate, when abroad students talk with their local friends, they need to use translation apps, thus, it will intermittent their discussion, also can cause unpleasant feelings to others. To conclude, it is certainly true that computers nowadays support people to translate in some ways, but this is by no means that people should not need to acquire foreign languages due to its important factor.
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rapidly
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, I
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disagree with the
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idea
that studying foreign
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languages
is unnecessary.

On the one hand, there are several advantages of using
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translation
softwares.
Firstly
, it
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only
takes a few seconds to
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translate
via computers. Nowadays, there are a wide range of usable
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translation
apps and within a portable device,
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people
can
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translate
words whenever they want in a
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little
amount of time. Unlike in the past, there was a
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need
of traditional dictionaries to
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translate
other
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languages
to their mother tongue and vice versa, which was time-consuming and inconvenient.
Secondly
, thanks to the advance of technology,
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people
can save a large amount of money
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because
they do not
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need
to hire interpreters anymore, which
of course
will cost them a great deal.
Instead
, they can utilise their computers to
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translate
new words by themself.

On the other hand
,
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people
could not reliant on computer
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translations
due to
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some
drawbacks.
First
of all, the
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translation
devices are not always
comprehensively
accurate.
This is due to the fact that
these applications,
in general
, can
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only
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translate
word-by-word and may overlook the context of sentences.
Therefore
, with academic paragraphs, learners may not
be offered
a correct
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translation
, which can
detrimentally
affect their demands. Another point to note is that using these equipments may disrupt their conversations. To illustrate, when abroad students talk with their local friends, they
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need
to
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use
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translation
apps,
thus
, it will intermittent their discussion,
also
can cause unpleasant feelings to others.

To conclude
, it is
certainly
true that computers nowadays support
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people
to
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translate
in
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some
ways,
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should not
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need
to acquire foreign
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languages
due to its
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important
factor.
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IELTS essay Some scholars believe that as computers translate quickly and accurately, learning a foreign language is a waste of time.

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