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Some say mothers are better parents than fathers are. What is your opinion?

Some say mothers are better parents than fathers are. What is your opinion? aVwXX
In salad days of millennium, society in polarized into two group almost equally regarding the notion that mother play better role than father in parenting while others believe opposite of it. Diffrent people have distint mindset. In this essay we will discuss both aspect with lucid example before giving final conclusion. To commence with first notion, there are myriad of reasons in its favour. First and foremost, in indian culture mother's feet is considered as second god. Mother play a vital role in children upbringing. She give basic understanding to his child how to live the life. Secondly, she give emotional support to his children as most of mothers are housewife they can give enough time to their children. Mother can make their children mentally strong by giving personal life experience from their lives. Shifting towards the second school of thought, I would like to infer that father play important role in child life. Firstly, father can give finantial support by providing enough money for studying. Without help of father he/she will never be sucessful in life. From farher one can get qualities like hardwork and patience. Father is considered as one of the best teacher of his child. Therefore, both mother and father is equally important. In conclusion, as for myself, all is well that ends well, from above elaborate statements, progmatic rather than hard-hosted approach is most convinient. Both parents give equal importance because individually they give diffrent qualities to his child. However, with benefit of hindseigh, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
In salad days of millennium, society in polarized into two group almost
equally
regarding the notion that
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mother
play better role than
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father
in parenting while others believe opposite of it.
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Diffrent
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people
have
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distint
mindset. In this essay we will discuss both aspect with lucid example
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before
giving final conclusion.

To commence with
first
notion, there are myriad of reasons in its
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favour
.
First
and foremost, in
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indian
culture mother's feet
is considered
as second god.
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Mother
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play
a vital role in
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children
upbringing. She
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give
basic understanding to his
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child
how to
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live
the
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life
.
Secondly
, she
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give
emotional support to his
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children
as
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most of mothers
are housewife they can
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give
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enough
time to their
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children
.
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Mother
can
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make
their
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children
mentally strong by giving personal
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life
experience from their
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lives
.

Shifting towards the second school of
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thought
, I would like to infer that
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father
play
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important
role in
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child
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life
.
Firstly
,
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father
can
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give
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finantial
support by providing
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enough
money for studying. Without
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help
of
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father
he/she will never be
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sucessful
in
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life
. From
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farher
one can
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get
qualities like
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hardwork
and patience.
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Father
is considered
as one of the best teacher of his
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child
.
Therefore
, both
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mother
and
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father
is
equally
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important
.

In conclusion
, as for myself, all is well that ends well, from above elaborate statements,
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progmatic
rather
than
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hard
-hosted approach is most
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convinient
. Both parents
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give
equal importance
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because
individually
they
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give
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diffrent
qualities to his
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child
.
However
, with benefit of
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hindseigh
, we conceive the more we research, the
further
we discover.
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IELTS essay Some say mothers are better parents than fathers are. What is your opinion?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
5.5
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