Some pp think success in life comes from hardworking and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.2
Some pp think success in life comes from hardworking and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. v. 2
some hold the opinion that it is hardworking and determination that make us succeed, while others consider outlook and budget more fundamental. From my prospective, all of these factors contribute to our achievements in life.
For one, effort and determination are the solutions which make up to 90% of our success in life. Not everyone was born with talent, hardworking will lead them to successful outcomes. For instance, unlike messi, Ronaldo was born untalented at football. However, he has been playing soccer from the day when he first saw a ball until now. Training everyday help him to have better skills. As a result, he has become messi biggest opponent at the moment, and he is as famous as messi. There is a well-known saying that " Practice makes perfect " and it is completely undoubted.
On the all the hand, appearance and money are not as vital as the factors i mentioned above, because they does not last long. they only contribute to our beginning success. Temporary idols are some clear examples. they maybe success at first sight, maybe for a few years or more. But when the get older, they doesn' t look as good as they used to be, so their fame decrease significantly. People relying on their appearance and money will find it hard to make lucrative income in their late years and they may have to live on a budget.
In conclusion, money and appearance only help you for several years. I always believe that hard work and determination pays off, which will make sure your long-term success.
some
hold the opinion that it is hardworking and determination that
make
us succeed, while others consider outlook and budget more fundamental. From my prospective, all of these factors contribute to our achievements in life.
For one, effort and determination are the solutions which
make
up to 90% of our
success
in life. Not everyone
was born
with talent, hardworking will lead them to successful outcomes.
For instance
, unlike
messi
, Ronaldo
was born
untalented at football.
However
, he has been playing soccer from the day when he
first
saw
a ball until
now
. Training everyday
help
him to have better
skills
.
As a result
, he has become
messi
biggest
opponent at the moment, and he is as
famous
as
messi
. There is a well-known saying that
"
; Practice
makes
perfect
"
; and it is completely undoubted.
On the all the hand, appearance and money are not as vital as the factors
i
mentioned above,
because
they
does
not last long.
they
only
contribute to our beginning
success
. Temporary idols are
some
clear
examples.
they
maybe
success
at
first
sight, maybe for a few years or more.
But
when the
get
older, they
doesn&
#039; t look as
good
as they
used
to be,
so
their fame decrease
significantly
.
People
relying on their appearance and money will find it
hard
to
make
lucrative income in their late
years and
they may
have to
live
on a budget.
In conclusion
, money and appearance
only
help
you for several years. I always believe that
hard
work and determination pays off, which will
make
sure your long-term
success
.
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9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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