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some phychologists think that the best way to overcome stress of everyday life is to spend a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

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In today's modern era, peoples are having hectic schedules and they usually be in a stress to make balance in between professional and personal life. One study says, having some break from a hectic life can improve work efficiency as well mental and physical strengh in person. I agree with the notion, and I would like to alobrate inclination for same in forthcoming paragraph. Nowdays, in digital world, pressuring environment getting worst for human's mental health. A working person always look forward to have a better career in professional life also have craving for wealthy economical social status which ultimately leads to luxiorious life style; in race of having all those needs, he build up pressure on himself which eventually convert in to stress and mental illness. Owing to stress, enumerous of dieases could be occur such as diebetes, highper tension, blood pressure, anxity, and sometime paves to worst situation. However, from recent survey, people have awareness about a mental health. In many multinational companies have considered stress as biggest weakness, and have adopted prevention of it. example of Google, who has created a seperate shell for employees to take break from their work. According to group of people, have a break in jampack schedule is stress-buster which is rejunevating a body and peace in mind, also improve productivity of work. Also a person can balance personal and professional life. Furthermore, many activities acquire by companies in globe to prevent stress such as: laughing exercise, yoga, and meditation. In addition to, for relieving stress, many workplace have started giving break to have power nap between long working hours. Also, short games have involved as part of working life from which employee can distress for a while. Furthermore, light music also play by few organizations, in period of time, at workplace to refresh mind which ultimately improves productivity and work efficiency. To conclude, necessity of awareness of stress is as much important as to cure it. One can overcome from it by taking precausion like, doing nothing but for relax some time of daily life.
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can
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efficiency
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mental
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strengh
in person. I
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alobrate
inclination for same in forthcoming paragraph.

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, in digital world, pressuring environment getting worst for human's
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health. A working person always look forward
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to have
a better career in professional
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life
also
have craving for wealthy economical social status which
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leads to
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luxiorious
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style; in race of having all those needs, he
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and
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illness. Owing to
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,
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of
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,
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, from recent survey,
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mental
health. In
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multinational
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companies
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as biggest weakness, and have adopted prevention of it. example of Google, who has created a
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break
from their
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work
. According to group of
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people
, have a
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in
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jampack
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-buster which is
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productivity of
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a person can balance personal and professional life.

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activities acquire by
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in globe to
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prevent
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stress
such as: laughing exercise, yoga, and meditation.
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,
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giving
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to have power nap between long working hours.
Also
, short games have involved as part of working
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life
from which employee can distress for a while.
Furthermore
, light music
also
play by few organizations, in period of time, at workplace to refresh mind which
ultimately
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improves
productivity and
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work
efficiency.

To conclude
, necessity of awareness of
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stress
is as much
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important
as to cure it. One can overcome from it by taking
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precausion
like, doing nothing
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for relax
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time of daily
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.
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IELTS essay some phychologists think that the best way to overcome stress of everyday life is to spend a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing.

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