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some peple say that personality doesn't change. do you agree

some peple say that personality doesn't change. do you agree KYdYL
By my view, your personality would change over time. The personality you change is often show by your feeling and your lifestyle. This is a very normal and natural thing. Your personality can be change because your age and your living enviroment. Changing personality more or less depend on yourself. For example, I used to liked playing doll with my friends when I was small, but when I grow up I fancy going out somewhere. Also my daily life has changed since I learn online. I alway stay up late and worst than I am being lazy. I can not concentrate while teacher is talking. So I think changing personality has both bad and good sides.
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more or less depend on yourself.
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to liked playing doll with my friends when I was
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when I grow up I fancy going out somewhere.
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since I learn online. I
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than I am being lazy. I can not concentrate while teacher is talking.
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IELTS essay some peple say that personality doesn't change. do you agree

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  American English
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116 words
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