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Some people when purchasing a product or a sevice conider price as an important thing? Do you agree or disagree v.2

Some people when purchasing a product or a sevice conider price as an important thing? v. 2
Price is considered as the most important factor by certain individuals when buying a product or a service. This essay agrees with the aforementioned statement as people do not want to spend their hard-earned money on purchasing unnecessary products of services, followed by a detailed conclusion. It is clear that people give attention to the value of a good or service such as a mobile phone or medical facility as they eel that buying over-priced products is a wasteful activity. This is to say, people spend hours working in offices in order to earn their monthly income, thus they do not want to spend it on purchasing useless products. As a result, they consider the price of goods a service as the most critical factor in the decision. To elucidate, a recent study conducted by The Times showed that more than 80 percent of people initially view the price of the goods, as they do not want to spend the useless amount in purchasing goods with no benefits. However, some believe that the value and the quality of the product or any service is a critical deciding factor rather than the price. In other words, people prefer to purchase any medical facility or mobile phone with superior features and benefits and do not give any importance to value, instead, they are willing to pay any amount for those goods or services. To exemplify, a recent study conducted by The New York Times showed that more than 60 percent of people prefer to purchase good quality products irrespective of their price. To conclude, individuals when buying any goods consider value as the critical factor. In my opinion, I vehemently agree that price should be considered so that people are not able to waste their monthly income on buying expensive useless products.
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by certain individuals when
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. This essay
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agrees
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people
do not want to
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their
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hard
-earned money on purchasing unnecessary
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products
of
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, followed by a detailed conclusion.

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people
give attention to the
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value
of a
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good
or
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service
such as a mobile phone or medical facility as
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they eel
that
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buying
over-priced
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products
is a wasteful activity. This is to say,
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people
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spend
hours working in offices in order to earn their monthly income,
thus
they do not want to
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spend
it on purchasing useless
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products
.
As a result
, they consider the
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price
of
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service
as the most critical
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factor
in the decision. To elucidate, a recent study conducted by The Times
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showed
that more than 80 percent of
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people
initially
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price
of the
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goods
, as they do not want to
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the useless amount in purchasing
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goods
with no benefits.

However
,
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some
believe that the
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value
and the quality of the
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or any
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is a critical deciding
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factor
rather
than the
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price
.
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,
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people
prefer to
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purchase
any medical facility or mobile phone with superior features and benefits and do not give any importance to
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value
,
instead
, they are willing to pay any amount for those
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or
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. To exemplify, a recent study conducted by The New York Times
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showed
that more than 60 percent of
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prefer to
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purchase
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good
quality
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products
irrespective of their price.

To conclude
, individuals when
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any
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consider
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as the critical
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price
should
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people
are not able to waste their monthly income on
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expensive useless
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8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people when purchasing a product or a sevice conider price as an important thing? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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