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Some people trust their first impressions of other other people, while others try not to judge quickly

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The majority of people believe that the initial impression is correct, whereas other people stated it is incorrect. In my perspective, the first impression is unbelievable and this essay will discuss the incorrectness of the first impression. Impressions are related to people's souls and most people hear their souls. However, it can confuse their feelings about others, that is why everyone should be careful about this theme. For instance, recent research has shown that 65% of people stated that, first impressions are true, but they are suffered from this. On the other hand, psychology books are helping to improve their outlook, and it helps to understand life. Many people change through feelings, and it causes several soul issues. I think that people should be clever and not be emotional. In conclusion, feelings can confuse people mind, and it has some detrimental impacts on life. They should look truly in their life and people then it would be better.
The majority of
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believe that the initial
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impression
is correct, whereas other
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people
stated it is incorrect. In my perspective, the
first
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impression
is unbelievable and this essay will discuss the incorrectness of the
first
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impression
.
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Impressions
are related
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people
's souls and most
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people
hear their souls.
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, it can confuse their feelings about others,
that is
why everyone should be careful about this theme.
For instance
, recent research has shown that 65% of
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people
stated that,
first
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impressions
are true,
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but
they
are suffered
from this.
On the other hand
, psychology books are helping to
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improve
their outlook, and it
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helps
to understand life.
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Many
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people
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change
through feelings, and it causes several soul issues. I
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think
that
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people
should be clever and not be emotional.

In conclusion
, feelings can confuse
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people
mind, and it has
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some
detrimental impacts on life. They should look
truly
in their life and
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people
then it would be better.
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IELTS essay Some people trust their first impressions of other other people, while others try not to judge quickly

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
158 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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