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Some people trust their first impressions about a person's character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person's character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Which v.6

Some people trust their first impressions about a person's character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person's character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Which v. 6
In today' s hectic world, it’s very common for people to judge a person by external appearance, because I is easy, direct and instinctive. Appearance is a very important aspect of a person and reflects one' s personalities. Some people are inclined towards the opinion that we can trust people and judge them just by first glance. Other, on the other hand, take a radically different view and allege that judge a person' s characters quickly by first glance will be wrong. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, although you can tell the person' s characteristics from his appearance, you cannot tell exactly what the person is like. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons. One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that by and large, it is established beyond doubt that first impressions are often wrong because nowadays people present in society with different style of clothing and appearance. Scientifically speaking, we all know that different types of clothes are designed in various forms and shapes and people regardless of their age wear clothe with different colors and style. Indeed, these clothes have unique meaning and people put them on in different places. But most of the time people judge a person based on his/her appearance and by first glance they may make a mistake about their personalities. Actually, internal characteristics should take into consideration in order to judge properly. Delving further into the issue reveal that although people may guess something about characteristics, judge based on external appearance and emotion will overwhelmed us with a sense of shame. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that vast majorities of people who judge based on impression suffer from paucity of knowledge and self-esteem because every human being know that in today' s hectic city no one are able to predict something right about other. Another reason that is equally important if not more is that myriads of people just pretend that they have some qualities that in reality they do not have. Broadly speaking, some people due to the lack of self-confidence want to show off in public and present in society in a way that crowds of people by first glance will recognized them as a complete man. In this case, people need to think deeply and judge them based on their internal characters. To put it in other word, appearance of people can be misleading and not until people judge them wisely can they known them as areal man. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, clothes which people wear in a society are made in a way that every human being can realize what characters a person have. In fact, those appearance give an insight to people to identify others through their impression and first glance. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale. To wrap it up, judge a person through his/her external appearance is not an ideal recognition. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that judgment based on appearance and what people wear can be highly misleading. In addition, people may pretend in a way that their characteristics are qualified. In this way, people should judge them thoroughly and not to believe something through their appearance.
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hand, take a
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view and allege that
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a
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person&
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quickly
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. Agreement is
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characteristics
from his
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appearance
, you cannot
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exactly what the
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person
is like. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.

One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that by and large, it
is established
beyond doubt that
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first
impressions are
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often
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wrong
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because
nowadays
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people
present in society with
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different
style of clothing and
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appearance
.
Scientifically
speaking, we all know that
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different
types of
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clothes
are designed
in various forms and shapes and
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people
regardless of their age wear
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clothe
with
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different
colors and style.
Indeed
, these
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clothes
have unique meaning and
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people
put them on in
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different
places.
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most of the time
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people
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a
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person
based on his/her
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and by
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first
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glance
they may
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make
a mistake about their personalities. Actually, internal
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characteristics
should take into consideration in order to
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judge
properly
. Delving
further
into the issue reveal that although
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people
may guess something about
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characteristics
,
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judge
based on external
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appearance
and emotion will
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overwhelmed
us with a sense of shame. A noteworthy
refreshingly
intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country
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show
that vast majorities of
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people
who
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judge
based on impression suffer from paucity of knowledge and self-esteem
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because
every human being
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know
that in
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today&
#039; s hectic city no one are able to predict something right about other.

Another reason
that is
equally
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important
if not more is that myriads of
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people
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just
pretend that they have
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qualities that in reality they do not have.
Broadly
speaking,
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some
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people
due to the lack of self-confidence want to
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show
off in public and present in society in a way that crowds of
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people
by
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first
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glance
will
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recognized
them as a complete
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man
.
In this case
,
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people
need to
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think
deeply
and
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judge
them based on their internal characters. To put it in
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other
word,
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appearance
of
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people
can be misleading and not until
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people
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judge
them
wisely
can they known them as areal
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man
.
However
, what I alluded to above cannot
be overgeneralized
to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has,
indisputably
,
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clothes
which
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people
wear in a society
are made
in a way that every human being can realize what characters a
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person
have. In fact, those
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appearance
give an insight to
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people
to identify others through their impression and
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first
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glance
.
Nevertheless
, it does not
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make
those preceding benefits pale.

To wrap it up,
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judge
a
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person
through his/her external
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appearance
is not an ideal recognition. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one
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soon
realize that judgment based on
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appearance
and what
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people
wear can be
highly
misleading.
In addition
,
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people
may pretend in a way that their
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characteristics
are qualified
. In this way,
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people
should
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judge
them
thoroughly
and not to believe something through their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appearance
.
17Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
77Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people trust their first impressions about a person's character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person's character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Which v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
577 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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