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Some people prefer to work for a large company. Other prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. v.7

Some people prefer to work for a large company. Other prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. v. 7
Some people prefer to work for a large company and others prefer to work for a small company, but I would like to work for a small company. There are many chances for growth and you can learn many new skills. First reason is that, there is very low chance of competition in a small company. In a big company, there are many suitable and skilled professionals for one position. Competitions also there in a big company. There are possibilities, that I will not win the race. So, chances of getting promoted are very less in big companies. Then, I have to work on the same position for long time. Secondly, I can learn new skills on a small company. Small companies cannot hire employees frequently for their limit investment. So, if I work for small company then I can do different types of jobs at one time. I can learn new skills, which will be beneficial for me in the future. But, in a big company I cannot learn new skills, as there are many other employees to do the job. I have to do always-same monotonous job if I will work for a big company. On the other hand, there are some advantages for big companies. The brand name of a big company is always preferable. You can also get a handsome salary package and other benefits like - insurance, bonus etc. Considering all the advantages and disadvantages, I would prefer to work for a small company. I would like to grow my skills with the company. The small company which I am working for, may be turn in to big company in future.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to work for a large company. Other prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. v. 7

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
276 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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