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Some people thinks that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people thinks it is bad. Discuss both these views and state your opinion.

Some people thinks that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people thinks it is bad. NKRd
I disagree with the statement that individuals should not pay taxes to the state. The government runs the country from the taxes it collects. Taxes are collected only from those who earn above a certain minimum limit. lt is our moral duty to pay taxes. Tax money collected by government is used to fund basic amenities, provide various services to citizens and for government administration and projects, running of jails and defense system, and many other operations. lt is not wrong to say that "taxes run a country. " Thus, it is very important for a government to make people pay taxes. Let us analyze why people do not want to pay taxes. The main reason is their dissatisfaction with government in serving them. They blame government for things like lack of infrastructure, poverty and unemployment, but they are not completely wrong as tax revenue is misused in some or the other way in every country. ln developed countries, however, because of higher satisfaction from government's functioning, citizens may be more willing to pay taxes. Another factor generating dissatisfaction is the tax structure itself. Often the tax system is complex and it drives people away from paying taxes. lt is also felt that the tax rates are high and tax slabs are unequal. So they feel it is not unethical if one goes for tax avoidance or tax evasion. Not paying taxes can drastically affect a country's revenue generation, my own country, India, for that matter. But then, it is equally desired that government come up with a fair tax structure and also make people aware where the taxes are being diverted. Even lowering the tax rates can help a country increase its tax collection as it would increase compliance among the taxpayers. Tax reform should also be fast so that no public grievance or non-compliance remains for long. A proper tax system backed up with strict tax laws can produce the best results. Summing up, I reiterate my opinion by saying that it is the duty of every citizen to pay tax and the duty of every government to use it appropriately in public interest.
I disagree with the statement that individuals should not
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pay
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taxes
to the state. The
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government
runs the
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country
from the
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taxes
it collects.
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Taxes
are collected
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only
from those who earn above a certain minimum limit.
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lt
is our moral duty to
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pay
taxes.

Tax money collected by
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is
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used
to fund basic amenities, provide various services to citizens and for
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administration and projects, running of jails and defense system, and
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many
other operations.
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lt
is not
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wrong
to say that
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"
taxes run a
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country
.
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"
Thus
, it is
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very
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important
for a
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government
to
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make
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people
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pay
taxes.

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Let
us analyze why
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people
do not want to
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pay
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taxes
. The main reason is their dissatisfaction with
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government
in serving them. They blame
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government
for things like lack of infrastructure, poverty and unemployment,
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but
they are not completely
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wrong
as
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tax
revenue
is misused
in
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some
or the other way in every
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country
.
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ln
developed
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countries
,
however
,
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because
of higher satisfaction from
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government
's

functioning, citizens may be more willing to
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pay
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taxes
. Another factor generating dissatisfaction is the
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tax
structure itself.
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Often
the
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tax
system is complex and it drives
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people
away from paying
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taxes
.
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lt
is
also
felt that the
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tax
rates are high and
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tax
slabs are unequal.
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So
they feel it is not unethical if one goes for
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tax
avoidance or
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tax
evasion.

Not paying
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taxes
can
drastically
affect a country's revenue generation, my
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own
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country
, India, for that matter.
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But
then, it is
equally
desired that
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government
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come
up with a
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fair
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tax
structure and
also
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make
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people
aware where the
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taxes
are
being diverted
. Even lowering the
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tax
rates can
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help
a
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country
increase its
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tax
collection as it would increase compliance among the taxpayers.
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Tax
reform should
also
be
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fast
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so
that no public grievance or non-compliance remains for long. A proper
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tax
system backed up with strict
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tax
laws can produce the best results.

Summing up, I reiterate my opinion by saying that it is the duty of every citizen to
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pay
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tax
and the duty of every
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government
to
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use
it
appropriately
in public interest.
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IELTS essay Some people thinks that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people thinks it is bad.

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  American English
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