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Some People Believe That Nowadays We Have Too Many Choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some People Believe That Nowadays We Have Too Many Choices. with this statement? 3BVl
According to some people the modern life provides us with an overwhelming number of options. I completely agree with that point because I believe the era of the internet and globalization has given us an incredible amount of alternatives and this is both good and bad. On the one hand, it has made products available at cheap rates; on the other hand, it leads to impulse buying. It is undeniable that the World Wide Web has led to dramatic availability of data and different services. Before the Internet information was a precious resource and people made efforts to gain it through books and education whereas currently we are rather forced to filter its stream so as not to get burdened by it. For example, earlier people used television with a limited choice of channels for entertainment while today we are able to watch whatever we like on demand and often for free. Alongside the influence of the internet, technical advance and globalization have eliminated barriers in international trade and transportation. The wide choice of foreign food products and other goods has made people extremely consumerist and seeking the meaning of their life in new purchases. The availability of choices can also overwhelm people and may even lead to the purchase of the wrong product or service. In conclusion, we are faced with a huge number of options in most areas of our life and they sometimes mislead us and make our choice too difficult. In order to avoid these disadvantages we should learn to recognize our real needs and values and make a right choice from the diverse options available. Do you have an essay on this topic? Submit it below in the comments for a free band score estimate.
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the modern life provides us with an overwhelming number of options. I completely
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agree
with that point
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because
I believe the era of the internet and globalization has
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given
us an incredible amount of alternatives and this is both
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good
and
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bad
. On the one hand, it has made products available at
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cheap
rates;
on the other hand
, it leads to impulse buying.

It is undeniable that the World Wide Web has led to dramatic availability of data and
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different
services.
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Before
the Internet information was a precious resource and
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people
made efforts to gain it through books and education whereas
currently
we are
rather
forced to filter its stream
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so
as not to
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get
burdened by it.
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, earlier
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people
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used
television with a limited
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choice
of channels for entertainment while
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today
we are able to
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watch
whatever we like on demand and
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often
for free.

Alongside the influence of the internet, technical advance and globalization have eliminated barriers in international trade and transportation. The wide
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choice
of foreign food products and other
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goods
has made
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people
extremely
consumerist and seeking the meaning of their life in new
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purchases
. The availability of
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choices
can
also
overwhelm
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people
and may even lead to the
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purchase
of the
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wrong
product or service.

In conclusion
, we
are faced
with a huge number of options in most areas of our
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life and
they
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sometimes
mislead us and
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make
our
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choice
too difficult. In order to avoid these disadvantages we should learn to recognize our real needs and values and
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make
a right
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choice
from the diverse options available.

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IELTS essay Some People Believe That Nowadays We Have Too Many Choices. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
290 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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