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Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while others think they should spend more time educating students. What is your view? v.2

Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while others think they should spend more time educating students. What is your view? v. 2
in The teachers play an indispensable role in any nations. they contribute to the growth of the coutries in diferent facets including ecnomicaly. Their time scheduling, however, is subjected to the various contraversies. A group of people believes that they should spend most of their time on doing research while others believe that increasing the knowledge of students is far importat and they should devote most of their time in the class. I adamatly believe that university professors should allocate their time to do research. First and foremost, it is more advantageous to students if teachers allocate most of their time to conduct researchs. We are living in the competitive word that pace of changes is more than any moment in the human history. Accordingly, to keep the pace with latest trends of information, they should stay in their office and study as much as possible. This approach can assist students in different ways. First, they can obtain the newest knolwdge from their professor which it would help them in upper level of their formative years of education. Considering a master student in the economics, as an example, if he aims to apply in one of the well-known universities in the world, he needs the have a thesis to show his knowledge and backgroung. In the case of using old fashion and second-handed knwledge in it, no university would accept him. Second, having a professor who has up to dated information, can enrich his resume because employer prefer to hire someone who is aware of latest trends on thechnologies and has worked with a teacher who has nomerous paper in his field. More importantly, the ultimate role of a student is to heighten the academic knowledge. Accordingly, the professors should only show them the path and probably solve some of their mistakes and remains are in the students' shoulder. It should be stressed that it is students in the university can use different methods to increase their knowledge including, self-study, using various websites like Coursera and Youtube. Admittedly, unsing these aproaches would deline the need of a professor to teach basic courses in class. When they reach the stage of doing research, now the help of the professor is crucial. In a nutshel, I subscribe to the idea that university faculties should spend their time as much as possible to do research. this is because it can pave the way of economic to the development and students can gain more information from these kind of teachers.
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coutries
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facets including
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time
scheduling,
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to the various
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contraversies
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people
believes that they should spend most of their
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time
on doing
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research
while others believe that increasing the
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knowledge
of
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students
is far
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importat and
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. I
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believe that
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university
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professors
should allocate their
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time
to do research.

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and foremost, it is more advantageous to
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students
if
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teachers
allocate most of their
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time
to conduct
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researchs
. We are living in the competitive word that pace of
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changes
is more than any moment in the human history.
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keep
the pace with
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latest
trends of information, they should stay in their office and study as much as possible. This approach can assist
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students
in
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different
ways.
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, they can obtain the newest
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knolwdge
from their
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professor
which it would
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help
them in upper level of their formative years of education. Considering a master
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student
in the economics, as an example, if he aims to apply in one of the well-known
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universities
in the world, he needs the have a thesis to
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show
his
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knowledge
and
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backgroung
. In the case of using
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old
fashion and second-handed
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knwledge
in it, no
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university
would accept him. Second, having a
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professor
who has up to dated information, can enrich his resume
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because
employer prefer to hire someone who is aware of
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latest
trends on
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thechnologies
and has worked with a
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teacher
who has
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nomerous
paper in his field.

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importantly
, the ultimate role of a
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student
is to heighten the academic
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knowledge
.
Accordingly
, the
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professors
should
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only
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show
them the path and
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university
can
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use
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different
methods to increase their
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knowledge
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Youtube
.
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,
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these
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the need of a
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professor
to teach basic courses in
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class
. When they reach the stage of doing
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research
,
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now
the
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help
of the
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professor
is crucial.

In a
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nutshel
, I subscribe to the
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idea
that
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university
faculties should spend their
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time
as much as possible to do
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research
.
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this
is
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because
it can pave the way of economic to the development and
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students
can gain more information from
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these kind
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teachers
.
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IELTS essay Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while others think they should spend more time educating students. What is your view? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
416 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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