Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

At work or school, you might encounter a problem that requires creativity -for example, you are given a task to complete that is very different from other tasks you do. In work or school situation that requires you to think creatively, would you prefer to v.2

At work or school, you might encounter a problem that requires creativity -for example, you are given a task to complete that is very different from other tasks you do. In work or school situation that requires you to think creatively, would you prefer to v. 2
In this competitive world we are currently living, problem-solving is one of the main capabilities that anyone should possess. People whether during their formative years of education or in their job, they encounter with various problems and if they cannot find a creative way to get out of it, it would have numerous detrimental impacts on the lives. This trend prompts a controversial issue, whether people should work as a group to be innovative and propose a solution or they can work alone on it. I adamantly prefer to work alone. I subscribe to this idea because I would more productive in this way and members would interfere with my thoughts. First and foremost, people are less efficient in the group working. When a group is formed, the responsibility of the group is on the shoulder of all members. Accordingly, they are not enough motivated to reach a proper outcome. As a result, they prefer to spend most of their time on by-products. For example, they tend to allocate their time to laughing and storytelling which are completely irrelevant to the ultimate task of the group. This issue has a considerable effect on the efficiency of the group. However, if someone works alone, he would not be faced with this problems because, in case of falling to accomplished the project on time, he would see the consequence of it personally. More importantly, some members of the group try to play a dominant role. As a matter of fact, some of the members of the groups would have a leader characteristic meaning that they influence other members and they would attract to them easily. In this circumstance, members prefer to accept all the dominant' s behaviors and solutions without thinking. This would lead the group to reach an unacceptable result. But working alone, you would work on the project and problem on your own. Last but not least, time scheduling of the groups is an arduous task. individuals should various daily task. This burden of responsibility provokes problem of time-planning. Admittedly, in the case of fixing a specific time during the week, the possibility of being absent is a lot. On the contrary, working individually does have this drawback since you can work on the project any time you want. In a nutshell, I prefer to work solely, because group working not only is not productive, but also the likelihood of deviating from the main goal of the group is a lot to a great extent. furthermore, since people have the various daily task, fixing a time for the meeting is quite difficult.
In this competitive world we are
currently
living, problem-solving is one of the main capabilities that anyone should possess.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
whether during their formative years of education or in their job, they encounter with various
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
and if they cannot find a creative way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
out of it, it would have numerous detrimental impacts on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
. This trend prompts a controversial issue, whether
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
should
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
as a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
to be innovative and propose a
Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
solution or
they can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
alone
on it. I
adamantly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prefer
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
alone
. I subscribe to this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I would more productive in this way and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
members
would interfere with my thoughts.

First
and foremost,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are less efficient in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
. When a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
is formed
, the responsibility of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
is on the shoulder of all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
members
.
Accordingly
, they are not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
motivated to reach a proper outcome.
As a result
, they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prefer
to spend most of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
on by-products.
For example
, they tend to allocate their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to laughing and storytelling which are completely irrelevant to the ultimate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
task
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
. This issue has a considerable effect on the efficiency of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
.
However
, if someone works
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
alone
, he would not
be faced
with
Did you mean "these"?
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
, in case of falling
Did you mean "to accomplish"?
to accomplished
the project on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, he would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the consequence of it
personally
.

More
importantly
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
members
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
try to play a dominant role. As a matter of fact,
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
members
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
groups
would have a leader characteristic meaning that they influence other
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
members and
they would attract to them
easily
. In this circumstance,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
members
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prefer
to accept all the
Possible spelling mistake found.
dominant&
#039; s behaviors and solutions without thinking. This would lead the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
to reach an unacceptable result.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
alone
, you would
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
on the project and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
on your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
.

Last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not least,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
scheduling of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
groups
is an arduous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
task
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
individuals
The word 'various' is a noun or an adjective. A verb is missing or misspelled, or maybe a comma is missing.
should various
daily
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
task
. This burden of responsibility provokes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
of time-planning.
Admittedly
, in the case of fixing a specific
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
during the week, the possibility of being absent is a lot.
On the contrary
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
individually
does have this drawback since you can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
on the project any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
you want.

In a nutshell, I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prefer
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
solely
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
is not productive,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
the likelihood of deviating from the main goal of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
is a lot to a great extent.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
furthermore
, since
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
have the various daily
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
task
, fixing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for the meeting is quite difficult.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
55Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay At work or school, you might encounter a problem that requires creativity -for example, you are given a task to complete that is very different from other tasks you do. In work or school situation that requires you to think creatively, would you prefer to v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
432 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts