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Some people think the world would be better if we all spoke the same language. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think the world would be better if we all spoke the same language. Q8oxX
In the modern era, language has been seen not only as a method which helps people to communicate, but also an interesting culture of each country to discover. However, a lot of residents find it difficult to learn a foreign language so they prefer having similar conversations all over the world to the variety of tounges. From my point of view, I partially disagree with the opinion that every country speaks the same language. In this essay, I will give some arguments to support my opinion. From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons why I believe that it is essential for a country to conserve its own voice. It is a valid point that language is a beauty of the traditions which have been maintained for thousands of years. To illustrate, it depicts the value of history and the country’s customs. That is because through daily speaking, residents enable to understand the enhancement of a culture and the survival of a country via wars. Besides that, each tounge has the function of representing how it was affected by the dynasties which dominated in that country during a specific period as well as provides information about the process of language formation. In addition, having their own speech is an important key to control the country’s policy. A good illustration of this is, citizens must be capable of educating themselves about their language in order to make a decision whenever the government gives them any official documents. As a consequence, they are able to distinguish between right and wrong and have the ability to fight for the truth if the leaders make some mistakes unfortunately. Moreover, if dwellers study their native language which people from another country cannot figure out, the secrets in the state apparatus will be safe. On the other hand, there are several arguments against the idea that it is not vital to have different languages between countries in the world. First and foremost, it is considered to be easier if humans can hold a conversation in the same language. This results in multinational corporations' development. To elaborate, the managers of this kind of economy can facilitate when they negotiate with other bosses from foreign companies. This results in assisting the owners to achieve the highest ambition for each purchase contract. Secondly, to some students who are not excellent at learning a second language, having the same voice will be the best happiness in their study procedure. There is a fact that a lot of students find it difficult for them to get used to others but not their mother tounge. This has led to their results in some exams being lower than what they expect, which prevents them from enrolling in a good school or universities. In conclusion, having problems with language has been a complex issue which will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future. Although it is more convenient for people to communicate if we speak in the same tounge, I believe it highly results in the lack of tradition of a country and the negative impacts to the government, which is never hoped to happen. Each language has its own beauty and it is the symbol for each country, that is why they should be protected and continue improving in the future.
In the modern era,
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language
has been
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seen
not
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as a method which
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helps
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people
to communicate,
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but
also
an interesting culture of each
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country
to discover.
However
,
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a lot of
residents find it difficult to learn a foreign
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language
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so
they prefer
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having
similar conversations all over the world to the variety of
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tounges
. From my point of view, I
partially
disagree with the opinion that every
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country
speaks the same
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language
. In this essay, I will give
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some
arguments to support my opinion.

From an
overall
perspective, there are two main reasons why I believe that it is essential for a
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country
to conserve its
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own
voice. It is a valid point that
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language
is a beauty of the traditions which have
been maintained
for thousands of years. To illustrate, it depicts the value of history and the
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country’s
customs.
That is
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because
through daily speaking, residents enable to understand the enhancement of a culture and the survival of a
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country
via wars.
Besides
that, each
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tounge
has the function of representing how it was
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affected
by the dynasties which dominated in that
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country
during a specific period
as well
as provides information about the process of
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language
formation.
In addition
,
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having
their
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own
speech is an
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important
key to control the
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country’s
policy. A
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good
illustration of this is, citizens
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must
be capable of educating themselves about their
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language
in order to
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make
a decision whenever the
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government
gives them any official documents. As a consequence, they are able to distinguish between right and
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wrong
and have the ability to fight for the truth if the leaders
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make
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some
mistakes unfortunately.
Moreover
, if dwellers study their native
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language
which
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people
from another
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country
cannot figure out, the secrets in the state apparatus will be safe.

On the other hand
, there are several arguments against the
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idea
that it is not vital to have
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different
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languages
between
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countries
in the world.
First
and foremost, it
is considered
to be easier if humans can hold a conversation in the same
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language
. This
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results
in multinational corporations' development. To elaborate, the managers of this kind of economy can facilitate when they negotiate with other bosses from foreign
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companies
. This
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results
in assisting the owners to achieve the highest ambition for each
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purchase
contract.
Secondly
, to
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some
students who are not excellent at learning a second
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language
,
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having
the same voice will be the best happiness in their study procedure. There is a fact that
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a lot of
students find it difficult for them to
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get
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used
to others
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but
not their mother
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tounge
. This has led to their
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results
in
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some
exams being lower than what they
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expect
, which
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prevents
them from enrolling in a
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good
school or universities.

In conclusion
,
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having
problems with
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language
has been a complex issue which will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future. Although it is more convenient for
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people
to communicate if we speak in the same
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tounge
, I believe it
highly
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results
in the lack of tradition of a
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country
and the
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negative
impacts to the
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government
, which is never hoped to happen. Each
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language
has its
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own
beauty and it is the symbol for each
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country
,
that is
why they should
be protected
and continue improving in the future.
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IELTS essay Some people think the world would be better if we all spoke the same language.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
551 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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