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The key solution for environmental issues for current generation to live less comfortable life to benifit future generations

The key solution for environmental issues for current generation to live less comfortable life to benifit future generations jdMGd
In recent times our planet has faced many environmental issues such as global warming and rampant pollution. Some people believe that the best solution is to reduce inhabitant's requirements in order to save the future generation. I completely agree with idea and i will support opinion with examples Firstly, government controls the demands of transportation such as own cars. For example, nowadays many people tend to possess own car and it can be essential for human. However, it can emit fossil fuels and poisoning toxins which is harmful for surroundings. As a result, it causes global warming in addition, it impacts on people's health which suffered respiratory diseases. Secondly, Plastic bags should be transferred into paper bags. For example, in many markets we can see that customers utilise plastic bags which cannot reproduce them. As results, rubbishes such as plastic bags consists of large part of world. In conclusion, I totally consider that the government should reduce the consumption of factors that harm environment.
In recent times our planet has faced
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environmental issues such as global warming and rampant pollution.
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Some
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people
believe that the best solution is to
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reduce
inhabitant's requirements in order to save the future generation. I completely
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agree
with
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Firstly
,
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government
controls the demands of transportation such as
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own
cars.
For example
, nowadays
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many
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people
tend to possess
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own
car and it can be essential for human.
However
, it can emit fossil fuels and poisoning toxins which is harmful for surroundings.
As a result
, it causes global warming
in addition
, it impacts on
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people
's health which suffered respiratory diseases.

Secondly
, Plastic
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bags
should
be transferred
into paper
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bags
.
For example
, in
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many
markets we can
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see
that customers
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utilise
plastic
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bags
which cannot reproduce them. As results, rubbishes such as plastic
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bags
consists of large part of world.

In conclusion
, I
totally
consider that the
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government
should
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reduce
the consumption of factors that harm environment.
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IELTS essay The key solution for environmental issues for current generation to live less comfortable life to benifit future generations

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
164 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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