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Some people think that young ones need to help the development of community with free service where other think that they should be paid. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some people think that young ones need to help the development of community with free service where other think that they should be paid. BJoGp

Nobody can deny that few number of individuals opine that youngsters have to do progression in the society whilst, other assume that they ought given the money to ameliorate the zeal in the divergent of workplaces. i will put shed light on the both views and my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs. To analyzing and explaining further first and foremost, youngers should be given wages so that they can manage the family budget and also carry their burden like tuition fees and other expenses of study

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 of individuals opine that youngsters This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 do progression in the society whilst, other assume that they ought This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 the money to ameliorate the zeal in The phrase 'the divergent of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
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 workplaces. Did you mean "I"?I
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 will put shed light on the both views and my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs. To analyzing and explaining further
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 and foremost, Possible spelling mistake found.youngerloungers
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 should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 wages This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they can manage the family budget and also
 carry their burden like tuition fees and other expenses of Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphstudy.study!study?study:study,study;
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