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One day the world's oil and gas reserves will run out. The rearch of alternative energy like wind power, solar power, burning waste and water power are cousing as much environmental damage as the oil and nuclear power sources they are intented to replace.

One day the world's oil and gas reserves will run out. The rearch of alternative energy like wind power, solar power, burning waste and water power are cousing as much environmental damage as the oil and nuclear power sources they are intented to replace. Nrq5b
In today's world, it is being observed the dependence of fossil fuels and other natural sources. It is obvious that all sources have their limits. That's why people had better use them directly and think about replacing fossil fuels to alternative energy sources. This essay discusses the benefits and the negative impacts of using alternative energy sources. Admittedly, the main alternative source of energy and it is cheaper. It should be used directly. For instance, there is not equally sunlight all the time and all countries. I think that the sunlight is one of the best choises to be replaced. Another alternative source is wind. It has its limitations, too. Even tough being suitable for fossil fuels, it has got some negative impacts. For instance, wind power causes the big number of noises. The strong wind mills deserves much environmental damage. Yet another source is burning waste. I am sure that it has more negative impacts than the others. If people do not burn the waste, the burn will be filled with rubbishes. The reason why it can be the worst choise to be replaced. In conclusion, I strongly believe that it would be better to replace even tough causing as much environmental damage as the oil and nuclear power sources.
In
today
's world, it is
being observed
the dependence of fossil fuels and other natural
sources
. It is obvious that all
sources
have their limits. That's why
people
had better
use
them
directly
and
think
about replacing fossil fuels to
alternative
energy
sources
. This essay discusses the benefits and the
negative
impacts of using
alternative
energy sources.

Admittedly
, the main
alternative
source
of energy and it is cheaper. It should be
used
directly
.
For instance
, there is not
equally
sunlight all the time and all countries. I
think
that the sunlight is one of the best
choises
to
be replaced
.

Another
alternative
source
is wind. It has its limitations, too. Even tough being suitable for fossil fuels, it has
got
some
negative
impacts.
For instance
, wind power causes the
big
number of noises. The strong wind mills deserves much environmental damage.

Yet
another
source
is burning waste. I am sure that it has more
negative
impacts than the others. If
people
do not burn the waste, the burn will
be filled
with rubbishes. The reason why it can be the worst
choise
to
be replaced
.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe that it would be better to replace even tough causing as much environmental damage as the oil and nuclear power
sources
.
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IELTS essay One day the world's oil and gas reserves will run out. The rearch of alternative energy like wind power, solar power, burning waste and water power are cousing as much environmental damage as the oil and nuclear power sources they are intented to replace.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
211 words
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