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Solar energy is most used why?is has advantages or disadvantages?

Solar energy is most used why? is has advantages or disadvantages? OV8PM
It is true that without energy people cannot survive properly. It is observed that solar energy is commonly used because of many reasons. I believe that it has some disadvantages also. To embark with reasons, Firstly since the solar energy has produced, people are saving their money as it reduces many expenses such as, electricity bills. solar energy saves expenses of production of electricity. Moreover, solar power can be used as being alternative of non renewable resources. For example, instead of petrol and diesel solor power can be used. However, solar energy can not be used in winter seasons. during rainy season it is useless. secondly, to prepare solar energy too much scientist's efforts are needed. In conclusion, it is widely used but not good enough in winter season.
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some
disadvantages
also
. To embark with reasons,
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has produced,
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people
are saving their money as it
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reduces
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many
expenses such as, electricity bills.
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solar
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saves expenses of production of electricity.
Moreover
,
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solar
power can be
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used
as being alternative of
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non renewable
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solor
power can be
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used
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However
,
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energy
can not be
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used
in winter seasons.
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during
rainy season it is useless.
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secondly
, to prepare
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too much scientist's efforts
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widely
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used
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good
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enough
in winter season.
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IELTS essay Solar energy is most used why? is has advantages or disadvantages?

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  American English
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