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The data sources clearly communicate the amount of clothing exported by disparate countries in over 4 years. It is obvious that the number of clothing exports from Colombia, and Myanmar uplifted noticeably. However, there has been an opposite trend in Japan. It can be clearly seen that that the quantity of clothing exports in Japan falled to the nearly 500 million dollars in 2003 after undergoing an increase to 560 million dollars in 2001. Despite a growth to 950 million dollars in 2001, the figure for clothing exports in Myanmar declined rapidly to approximately 440 million dollars after that 2 years and its total increase was roughly 430 million dollars that used to be the highest compared to two other countries. Consequently, there was a steady upward trend from 430 million dollars to 600 million dollars in the number of clothing in Colombia during the period from 1999 to 2003.

The data sources clearly
 communicate the amount of clothing exported by disparate countries in over 4 years.

It is obvious that the number of clothing exports from Colombia, and Myanmar uplifted noticeably
. However
, there has been an opposite trend in Japan.

It can be clearly
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 in 2001, the figure for clothing exports in Myanmar declined rapidly
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 after that 2 years and its total increase was roughly 430 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 to 600 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in the number of clothing in Colombia during the period from 1999 to 2003. 