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Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive. To what extent do you agree?

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IELTS essay Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
73 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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