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What is the importance of historical buildings should they be kept or demolished to make better hotels aur Multiplex give reason and examples for your answer?

What is the importance of historical buildings should they be kept or demolished to make better hotels aur Multiplex give reason and examples for your answer? VWE7
History is the past events, especially for human beings is there any Paramount of ancient buildings out to remain same or reap to introduce luxurious hotel or any other buildings. I reckon that it should be logged and make and spectacular things over there reason of my inclination are articulated in upcoming paragraph. The predominant justification to support my ideology is that the to be relaxed in the life a person wants better amenities and extraordinary environment. To explicate, due to hectic schedule of individuals that do not get adequate time to live their life peacefully however, more than excellent buildings: hotels, resorts, and box offices there is our older days buildings which is inaccurate and unuseful Owning to in the present scenario, the majority of folks have demand to spend time in that place in which he gets a sense of achievement so, there is no use of former days buildings. To epitome, in New Zealand, older period has been reintroduced to magnificent and building by regulatory bodies. Thus, the rate of tension of the citizen which those people are struggling has been mitigated after spending time in betterment places. Moreover, in historical building there would be more charges of service which is need to pay by authorities like maintenance, coloring, and, watchman remuneration it can get myriad of mislaying to the administrative. Also, whenever masses want any information about former times building, without adversity there can easily obtain on internet within a couple of minutes. Furthermore, not only a particular hotels' owner get benefit but also that's will contribute to the government and make fruitful money. For instance, in London, they are less than 30% of historical building and 70% places has been occupied by varied types of building. As a result, the rate of economic of particular country will upsurge and the poverty ratio will deteriorate. In conclusion, although ancient period buildings are play vital role in some cases, happiness of human being is more essential than historical building due to the fact it is providing from luxurious places.
History is the past
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events
,
especially
for human beings is there any Paramount of ancient
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buildings
out to remain same or reap to introduce luxurious hotel or any other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
. I reckon that it should
be logged
and
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make
and spectacular things over there reason of my inclination
are articulated
in upcoming paragraph.

The predominant justification to support my ideology is that the to
be relaxed
in the life a person wants better amenities and extraordinary environment. To explicate, due to hectic schedule of individuals that do not
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get
adequate
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time
to
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live
their life
peacefully
however
, more than excellent
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buildings
: hotels, resorts, and box offices there is our older days
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buildings
which is inaccurate and unuseful Owning to in the present scenario, the majority of folks have demand to spend
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time
in that place in which he
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gets
a sense of achievement
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so
, there is no
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use
of former days
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buildings
. To epitome, in New Zealand, older period has
been reintroduced
to magnificent and
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building
by regulatory bodies.
Thus
, the rate of tension of the citizen which those
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people
are struggling has
been mitigated
after spending
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time
in betterment places.

Moreover
, in historical
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building
there would be more charges of service which
is need
to pay by authorities like maintenance, coloring, and, watchman remuneration it can
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get
myriad of mislaying to the administrative.
Also
, whenever masses want any information about former
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times
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building
, without adversity there can
easily
obtain on internet within a couple of minutes.
Furthermore
, not
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only
a particular hotels' owner
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get
benefit
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but
also
that's will contribute to the
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government
and
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make
fruitful money.
For instance
, in London, they are less than 30% of historical
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building
and 70% places has
been occupied
by varied types of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
.
As a result
, the rate of economic of particular country will upsurge and the poverty ratio will deteriorate.

In conclusion
, although ancient period
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buildings
are play vital role in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cases, happiness of human being is more essential than historical
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building
due to the fact it is providing from luxurious places.
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IELTS essay What is the importance of historical buildings should they be kept or demolished to make better hotels aur Multiplex give reason and examples for your answer?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
342 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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