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Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative trend?

Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. 7OW6
There are countries wherein local supply of food is scarce at times and as a solution, they import massive amounts of food from other nation. Although this may have an economic drawback, I believe that importing foods to fix food shortages is a positive trend. Importing enormous amounts of food can negatively affect the economy. Some of the imported crops can be vastly available locally which affects the food supply and consequently, the overall sales of the locally available products. For example, in the Philippines, where there is an abundant supply of rice, vast imports of rice from other country will greatly increase the nation's overall rice supply. As a result, locally available rice are set to lower prices to stay competitive in the market. This does not only disrupt the supply chain but also has a destructive impact to the economy. On the other hand, importing food from other country is beneficial to nations where local food products is scarce. Some foods are only available to certain places in the world, hence, nations have to import foods that are not available to them. For instance, strawberries can only grow in high and cold land so tropical countries are forced to import it from other nations. This way, everyone has a chance to enjoy eating certain foods even when it cannot be grown locally. In conclusion, even though there can be an economic downside of importing massive amounts of food from other countries, I believe that it is still a positive trend as it can solve food scarcity. Food imports can be beneficial but it should be controlled to prevent negative consequences on the economy.
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is scarce at times and as a solution, they
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import
massive amounts of
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other
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. Although this may have an economic drawback, I believe that importing
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food
shortages is a
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positive
trend.

Importing enormous amounts of
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food
can
negatively
affect the economy.
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imported crops can be
vastly
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available
locally
which affects the
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food
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supply
and
consequently
, the
overall
sales of the
locally
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available
products.
For example
, in the Philippines, where there is an abundant
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supply
of
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rice
, vast
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imports
of
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rice
from
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other
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country
will
greatly
increase the nation's
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rice
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rice
are set
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hand, importing
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is beneficial to
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where local
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products is scarce.
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are
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to certain places in the world,
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have to
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that are not
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, strawberries can
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grow in high and
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land
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tropical
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other
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nations
. This way, everyone has a chance to enjoy eating certain
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foods
even when it cannot
be grown
locally
.

In conclusion
,
even though
there can be an economic downside of importing massive amounts of
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other
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countries
, I believe that it is
still
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trend as it can solve
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scarcity.
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imports
can be beneficial
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consequences on the economy.
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IELTS essay Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.5
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