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Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people.

Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. NJeq
In today's world, noise pollution is a serious issue in the big cities. Some people claim that laws should be regulated to reduce noise amount in the environment. However, these laws can lead to the restriction of freedom and other activities of people. Some people in the society hold the idea that the amount of noise in the cities need to be regulated by legislations. They support their ideas though some reasons. First and foremost, the psychology of people is affected easily by the amount of noise. If quiet places become more popular, people will be healthier and more efficient in their daily lives. Furthermore, this will affect the quality of the cities; for example, people can be more polite to each other and more aware of their environment. Another good side of the less noise is the building resistance. Researches conducted by a group of scientists show that noise pollution reduces the durability of buildings. Thus, buildings can resist longer in the cities. On the other hand, strict laws may lead to lack of freedom and other unwanted circumstances. Many musicians can not perform their music in specific hours such as night times. As a result, they can not improve their abilities and can not develop new music. Also, people who participate in concerts do not enjoy their leisure activities. Secondly, a vast majority of people spend their free time at parties, bars or different noisy activities. If the government forces people not to attend these kinds of activities, freedom will not be an essential value in the societies anymore. To conclude, noise pollution is an important issue in our lives. Some people believe that local authorities should bring new laws to regulate the amount of noise in the society. However, some group of people believe that this will lead to worse problems in the cities and other places.
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reduce
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noise
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in the environment.
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laws
can lead to the restriction of freedom and
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activities
of
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people
.

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in the society hold the
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idea
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of
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need to
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legislations
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affected
easily
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amount
of
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noise
. If quiet places become more popular,
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people
will be healthier and more efficient in their daily
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lives
.
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, this will affect the quality of the
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cities
;
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people
can be more polite to each
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other
and more aware of their environment. Another
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side of the less
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noise
is the building resistance. Researches conducted by a group of scientists
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noise
pollution
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reduces
the durability of buildings.
Thus
, buildings can resist longer in the cities.

On the
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hand, strict
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laws
may lead to lack of freedom and
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unwanted circumstances.
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musicians can not perform their music in specific hours such as
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night times
.
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, they can not
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improve
their abilities and can not develop new music.
Also
,
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who participate in concerts do not enjoy their leisure
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activities
.
Secondly
, a vast majority of
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people
spend their free time at parties, bars or
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noisy
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activities
. If the
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government
forces
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people
not to attend these kinds of
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activities
, freedom will not be an essential value in the societies anymore.

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,
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noise
pollution is an
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important
issue in our
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lives
.
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Some
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people
believe that local authorities should bring new
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laws
to regulate the
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amount
of
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noise
in the society.
However
,
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some
group of
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people
believe that this will lead to worse problems in the
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cities
and
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other
places.
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IELTS essay Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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