Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.10
Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. v. 10
It is believed, by a few number of the population, that to live happily, the teenager period is the best, but in contrast, some said, happiness is involved in dealing with responsibilities, so the grownup age is much better. In my strong conviction, both the stages play a vital role, to develop the overall personality of a human being.
Firstly, an adolescent age involves all the leisure activities including more fun and less work. Hence, a person spends the happiest times. According to the survey, conducted by the Youth Council of India in 2018, they concluded that, 92% of the total crowd were happy during their youngest stage of life, because they can play indoor and outdoor games. Additionally, they were not burdened with heavy assignments. As a result, people were quite energetic and could participate in multidisciplinary activities, for instance, dance, singing, acting and sports.
Secondly, while entering in the second stage of life, namely, the adult, involves a lot of care and responsibilities toward the family and household chores. To illustrate, a survey was conducted, which focused on women, particularly, they concluded that, this stage of life puts a heavy load on their shoulders and finally, could not perform at workplaces more efficiently, but in comparison, they enjoyed daily household tasks and could even handle their kids comfortably while performing various assignments. As a result, women became more active and mature than men.
To conclude, both the perceptions played an eminent role to develop the lifestyle of an individual. Furthermore, a person has to go through all these cycles, in order to gain happiness, self-esteem as well as sense of maturity.
It
is believed
, by a
few number
of the population, that to
live
happily
, the
teenager
period is the best,
but
in contrast
,
some
said, happiness
is involved
in dealing with responsibilities,
so
the grownup age is much better. In my strong conviction, both the
stages
play a vital role, to develop the
overall
personality of a human being.
Firstly
, an adolescent age involves all the leisure activities including more fun and less work.
Hence
, a person spends the happiest times. According to the survey, conducted by the Youth Council of India in 2018, they concluded that, 92% of the total crowd were happy during their youngest
stage
of life,
because
they can play indoor and outdoor games.
Additionally
, they were not burdened with heavy assignments.
As a result
,
people
were quite energetic and could participate in multidisciplinary activities,
for instance
, dance, singing, acting and sports.
Secondly
, while
entering in the second
stage
of life,
namely
, the adult, involves
a lot of
care and responsibilities toward the family and household chores. To illustrate, a survey
was conducted
, which focused on women,
particularly
, they concluded that, this
stage
of life puts a heavy load on their shoulders and
finally
, could not perform at workplaces more
efficiently
,
but
in comparison
, they enjoyed daily household tasks and could even handle their kids
comfortably
while performing various assignments.
As a result
, women became more active and mature than
men
.
To conclude
, both the perceptions played an eminent role to develop the lifestyle of an individual.
Furthermore
, a person
has to
go through all these cycles, in order to gain happiness, self-esteem
as well
as sense of maturity.
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