Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people"s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.1
Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people"s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. v. 1
There is a constant pursuit of happiness throughout our lives. Needless to say, while it is considered by the vast majority of people-count me in- that the most enjoyable time of life is adolescence period, yet, appreciable sum of people believe that adulthood is second to no none time of life. Despite the overwhelming obligations. In this essay we will elaborate the whole debate and point of views.
Some could be influenced by the enormous burdens on an adult's shoulders, which include; paying bills, obtaining a constant figure and also raising children, yet a lot of them could be an amusing life. As the medium-aged group are capable of living their lives freely making their own choices without being blamed, for instance; travelling overseas, drinking alcohol, spending their money on whatever their fingertips can be reached by, besides investing in whatever they imagine to be beneficial. This sensational feeling of being the decision maker and owning your life rather than being thoughtfully hijacked is just do delightful.
Nevertheless, in my own point of view the youth life is the time of our life, where we not only get to be impulsive and outgoing, but also be responsibility free as our raiser will be devoted to take good care of us, while giving us the time and space to encounter and experience new things for example, a young love story that will be recalled throughout our lifetime.
In conclusion, as far as I am concerned happiness is a choice that could be felt whenever, wherever you genuinely want to but in my opinion the road to happiness is more paved by the hands of our parents during adolescence.
There is a constant pursuit of happiness throughout our
lives
. Needless to say, while it
is considered
by the vast majority of
people
-count me in- that the most enjoyable
time
of
life
is adolescence period,
yet
, appreciable sum of
people
believe that adulthood is second to no none
time
of
life
. Despite the overwhelming obligations. In this essay we will elaborate the whole debate and point of views.
Some
could
be influenced
by the enormous burdens on an adult's shoulders, which include; paying bills, obtaining a constant figure and
also
raising children,
yet
a lot of
them could be an amusing
life
. As the medium-aged group are capable of living their
lives
freely
making their
own
choices without
being blamed
,
for instance
; travelling overseas, drinking alcohol, spending their money on whatever their fingertips can
be reached
by,
besides
investing in whatever they
imagine to be
beneficial. This sensational feeling of being the decision maker and owning your
life
rather
than being
thoughtfully
hijacked is
just
do delightful.
Nevertheless
, in my
own
point of view the youth
life
is the
time
of our
life
, where we not
only
get
to be impulsive and outgoing,
but
also
be responsibility free as our raiser will
be devoted
to take
good
care of us, while giving us the
time
and space to encounter and experience new things
for example
, a young
love
story that will
be recalled
throughout our lifetime.
In conclusion
, as far as I
am concerned
happiness is a choice that could
be felt
whenever, wherever you
genuinely
want to
but
in my opinion the road to happiness is more paved by the hands of our parents during adolescence.
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