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Some people think that the spread of multinational companies and globalization produce positive outcomes for everyone. There are a number of people who believe that globalization and the expansion of multinational corporations are beneficial to the society.

Some people think that the spread of multinational companies and globalization produce positive outcomes for everyone. There are a number of people who believe that globalization and the expansion of multinational corporations are beneficial to the society. W8rM5

There is no doubt globalization is like vaccine for the poverty disease as well as a chance for the people who is jobless. And i strongly agree with this fact and will explain my ideas in next paragraph. First of all easy to buy and helpful to provide job anyone, because if a person who is living in India and he want to buy a i phone then he can purchase it easily and also have no need to go America to buy as well as its make a job option for needy people because when companies come to other countries for Buisness they hire to other people for work or making products

There is no doubt globalization is like vaccine for the poverty disease as well
 as a chance for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who Did you mean "am", "are", "aren"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'people' should be used.amarearen
is
 jobless. And Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this fact and will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 in next
 paragraph.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
 easy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 and helpful to provide job anyone, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 if a person who is living in Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).India, and
India and
 he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".wantswanted
want
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 phone then he can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it easily
 and also
 have no need to go America to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
as well
 as its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a job option for needy This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 when This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to other countries for Possible spelling mistake found.Business
Buisness
 they hire to other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 for work or making products