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Some people think that the only way to judge someone's success in business is by the amount of money they make.Is money a true indicator of the success of business? In what other ways could success in a business be measured?

Some people think that the only way to judge someone's success in business is by the amount of money they make. Is money a true indicator of the success of business? In what other ways could success in a business be measured? r7Ql
Income generated by a person is generally looked upon by others as the sign of their career achievement. People believe ones finances determine how that individual is prospering in their profession. However there are various methods to determine someone’s financial attainment. To the best of my knowledge, I think that one's financial gains are not the only way to assess one's life achievements. Although a business's primary goal is to make a profit and attract more investors in order to grow, this cannot be the only goal. It is required for the operation of the company and will still be required for its expansion and smooth operation. Employee satisfaction is one of the factors used to assess a company's success rate. Employees can make or break a business. Employees who are dissatisfied with their job or with the company may act irrationally, show little interest in their work, or even quit. A company with insufficient manpower cannot function correctly. Customers' satisfaction, like that of the employees, is critical to the business's success. The way a company conducts business with its clients is also an important factor to consider. the manner in which an employee treats a customer if the customer is satisfied with the company's product quality and is properly treated. A key factor in a company's success is its contribution and accountability to society. It creates job opportunities for the local community and conducts business while keeping natural resources in mind. A profitable company should not be conducted at the expense of polluting the environment in which we live. Decision-making is critical to a company's success, as the person who makes the best decisions rises to the top of the pyramid. For example, a company that earns $5 million in two years and then goes bankrupt is unquestionably not considered successful compared to a company that earns $5 million in six years and consistently gains more customers and investors. . To summarize, profit alone is insufficient to determine the state of an entrepreneur. The success of the dealer is determined by factors such as the size of the customer base, the number of economic duties assumed, and the conglomerate's creditworthiness.
Income generated by a person is
generally
looked upon by others as the
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sign
of their career achievement.
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People
believe
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ones
finances determine how that individual is prospering in their profession.
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However
there are various methods to determine someone’s financial attainment.

To the best of my knowledge, I
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think
that one's financial gains are not the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
way to assess one's life achievements. Although a business's primary goal is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a profit and attract more investors in order to grow, this cannot be the
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only
goal. It
is required
for the operation of the
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company
and will
still
be required
for its expansion and smooth operation.

Employee satisfaction is one of the
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factors
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used
to assess a
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company's
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success
rate.
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Employees
can
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make
or break a business.
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Employees
who
are dissatisfied
with their job or with the
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company
may act
irrationally
,
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show
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little
interest in their work, or even quit. A
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company
with insufficient manpower cannot function
correctly
. Customers' satisfaction, like that of the
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employees
, is critical to the business's
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success
. The way a
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company
conducts business with its clients is
also
an
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important
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factor
to consider.
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the
manner in which an
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employee
treats a
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customer
if the
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customer
is satisfied
with the
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company's
product quality and is
properly
treated. A key
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factor
in a
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company's
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success
is its contribution and accountability to society. It creates job opportunities for the local community and conducts business while keeping natural resources in mind. A profitable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
should not
be conducted
at the expense of polluting the environment in which we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
. Decision-making is critical to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
success
, as the person who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
the best decisions rises to the top of the pyramid.
For example
, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
that earns $5 million in two years and then goes bankrupt is
unquestionably
not considered successful compared to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
that earns $5 million in six years and
consistently
gains more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customers
and investors.
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.


To summarize
, profit alone is insufficient to determine the state of an entrepreneur. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
success
of the dealer
is determined
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
factors
such as the size of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
base, the number of economic duties assumed, and the conglomerate's creditworthiness.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the only way to judge someone's success in business is by the amount of money they make. Is money a true indicator of the success of business? In what other ways could success in a business be measured?

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4 paragraphs
361 words
6.0
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