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Some people think that the government to support the cause of death the

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However, this is not suitable for everyone and many people's republic of Bangladesh have no idea what job they would like to do when they are 18. For these young people, it is better to do a non-vocational course, such as philosophy and simply add to their intellect without a career goal in mind. If they were forced to study a more practical subject, they are more likely to quit or become disillusioned because they don’t see the point of their chosen subject. For example, The Times recently reported that only 50% of law graduates actually want to become lawyers at the end of their studies. In conclusion, the function of college is to both prepare students for
However
, this is not suitable for everyone and
many
people
's republic of Bangladesh have no
idea
what job they would like to do when they are 18. For these young
people
, it is better to do a non-vocational course, such as philosophy and
simply
add
to their intellect without a career goal in mind. If they
were forced
to study a more practical subject, they are more likely to quit or become disillusioned
because
they don’t
see
the point of their chosen subject.
For example
, The Times recently reported that
only
50% of law graduates actually want to become lawyers at the
end
of their studies.

In conclusion
, the function of college is to both prepare students for
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IELTS essay Some people think that the government to support the cause of death the

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
117 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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