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Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the internet at home to obtain information Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Libraries are important for all kind of people who want to gather knowledge. Some are of the opinion that public libraries should be established by government in all parts of nation, where others believe that people can get information from internet and putting more public libraries is waste of money. This essay shall discuss both the viewpoints. However, I agree to the later statement. Out of many benefits of internet library, one is that you can access it any time. This is not in the case public library. For instance, public libraries have fixed schedule like 9: 00 am to 10: 00 pm, while internet libraries do not have any of that. Similarly, person has to visit the library in order to get the book, but with internet they can get it in their phone, laptop or PC at home. Furthermore, developing public library on internet is way more efficient than making it physically. For example, government has to the build for the library; it requires more money and time. Also, having a physical building means constrain in storage capacity and have to spend money on up keeping of the place. For the case of internet library, government can make it less time and less money; it do not have any storage problems and require handful of people to maintenance. However, some people are still in favor of government making a physical library. They believe that internet libraries cannot fully catch the essence of reading in physical library. These people are of community who still likes to go to library and read books physically. All in all, Internet libraries are more efficient and government should be spend money on making them.
Libraries are
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important
for all kind of
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people
who want to gather knowledge.
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Some
are of the opinion that
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public
libraries should
be established
by
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government
in all parts of nation, where others believe that
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people
can
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get
information from internet and putting more
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public
libraries is waste of
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money
. This essay shall discuss both the viewpoints.
However
, I
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agree
to the later statement.

Out of
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many
benefits of internet library, one is that you can access it any time. This is not in the case
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public
library.
For instance
,
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public
libraries have
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fixed
schedule like 9: 00 am to 10: 00 pm, while internet libraries do not have any of that.
Similarly
, person
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has to
visit the library in order to
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get
the book,
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but
with internet they can
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get
it in their phone, laptop or PC at home.

Furthermore
, developing
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public
library on internet is way more efficient than making it
physically
.
For example
,
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government
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has to
the build for the library; it requires more
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money
and time.
Also
, having a physical building means constrain in storage capacity and
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have to
spend
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money
on up keeping of the place. For the case of internet library,
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government
can
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make
it less time and less
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money
; it
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do
not have any storage problems and require handful of
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people
to maintenance.

However
,
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some
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people
are
still
in favor of
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government
making a physical library. They believe that internet libraries cannot
fully
catch the essence of reading in physical library. These
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people
are of community who
still
likes to go to library and read books
physically
.

All in all, Internet libraries are more efficient and
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government
should be
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spend
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money
on making them.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the internet at home to obtain information

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
281 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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