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Some people think that the best way to improve safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion v.2

Some people think that the best way to improve safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles others think there are other better ways. 2
Large number of people believe lowering the highest speed limits on vehicles is the most effective means of improving safety, whereas some think otherwise. This essay will extensively discuss reducing the maximum speed limits as the best way of improving safety and also other possible ways along side my opinion. On the one hand, ensuring the speed limits of vehicles is a good way of controlling or reducing the Rate of accident that occur daily which is said to be as a result of divers inability to control their speed. Doing this help not to subject that aspect of control to human because so many things can cause drivers not to pay attention. They sure are aware of the implication of speeding. However, these tend to go beyond the recommended limit. For instance, an accident occurred some days back around the third mainland bridge, which the cause was due to the high speed limit of the driver and majority lost their courage at that point. On the other Hand, ways such as construction of good roads, ensuring only licenced drivers on the road and so on are common ways of ensuring safety. More so, issues that cause Lack of safety like the above might be impossible to eradicate in totally but without any doubt will improve safety. For example, a Bad road along the state bridge recorded that several accidents in the space of 2weeks. However, the road got repaired over 5months now. Up till now no accident has been recorded. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that, other measures of improving safety are better put in place rather than focusing on reducing vehicle speed limit. Research and Feedbacks from the public is positive in this regards.
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believe lowering the highest
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speed
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limits
on vehicles is the most effective means of improving
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safety
, whereas
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some
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think
otherwise
. This essay will
extensively
discuss reducing the maximum
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speed
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limits
as the best
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way
of improving
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safety
and
also
other possible
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ways
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along side
my opinion.

On the one hand, ensuring the
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speed
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limits
of vehicles is a
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good
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way
of controlling or reducing the Rate of
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accident
that occur daily which
is said
to be
as a result
of divers inability to control their
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speed
. Doing this
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help
not to subject that aspect of control to human
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because
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so
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things can cause drivers not to pay attention. They sure are aware of the implication of speeding.
However
, these tend to go beyond the recommended
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limit
.
For instance
, an
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accident
occurred
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some
days back around the third mainland bridge, which the cause was due to the high
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speed
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limit
of the driver and majority lost their courage at that point.

On the other Hand
,
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ways
such as construction of
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good
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roads
, ensuring
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only
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licenced
drivers on the
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road
and
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so
on are common
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ways
of ensuring
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safety
. More
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so
, issues that cause Lack of
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safety
like the above might be impossible to eradicate in
totally
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but
without any doubt will
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improve
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safety
.
For example
, a
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Bad
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road
along the state bridge recorded that several
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accidents
in the space of 2weeks.
However
, the
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road
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got
repaired over 5months
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now
. Up till
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now
no
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accident
has
been recorded
.

In conclusion
, I am of the opinion that, other measures of improving
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safety
are better put in place
rather
than focusing on reducing vehicle
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speed
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limit
. Research and Feedbacks from the public is
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positive
in
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this
regards.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that the best way to improve safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles others think there are other better ways. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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