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Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year. yXqRd
In the modern world, private transportation is increasing every day and there is a widespread belief that driving tests will reduce road accidents. In my opinion, I do not agree with this hypothesis. Nowadays, a number of people have private cars and bikes in major cities as well as rural areas, therefore it decreases road transport safety for everyone. Sometimes we can see that most of the road accidents occur by careless people and one guy will be innocent, hence the driving test is not a perfect solution for dwellers. Moreover. the state government should announce traffic instructions on the highly trafficked areas so that people are aware of traffic rules. They can increase the traffic police on the circle as well as more traffic jam areas. At present, the quality of road and road infrastructure are reduced. To illustrate, according to a recent research by the traffic agency, the highest number of accidents occur, where the light is lowest beside the road. In addition, traffic departments should ensure the number of signal lights are enough for more congested areas along with the circle. If people give the driving test yearly, it is a total waste of time for people, the government and management. Furthermore, one crucial cause of accidents is alcohol and drugs. Young people take drugs and alcohol during the driving time, then they lose control on steering and it is a dangerous occurrence for themselves and other people. To elucidate, while people may vary in their opinion, I reckon that the government should make the best traffic policies and people are obligation to follow their guidelines.
In the modern world, private transportation is increasing every day and there is a widespread belief that
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tests
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reduce
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road
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accidents
. In my opinion, I do not
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agree
with this hypothesis.

Nowadays, a number of
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people
have private cars and bikes in major cities
as well
as rural areas,
therefore
it decreases
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road
transport safety for everyone.
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Sometimes
we can
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see
that most of the
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road
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accidents
occur by careless
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people
and one guy will be innocent,
hence
the
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driving
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test
is not a perfect solution for dwellers.
Moreover
.
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the
state
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government
should announce
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traffic
instructions on the
highly
trafficked areas
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so
that
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people
are aware of
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traffic
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rules
. They can increase the
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traffic
police on the circle
as well
as more
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traffic
jam areas.

At present, the quality of
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road
and
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road
infrastructure are
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reduced
. To illustrate, according to a recent research by the
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traffic
agency, the highest number of
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accidents
occur, where the light is
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lowest
beside the
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road
.
In addition
,
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traffic
departments should ensure the number of signal lights are
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enough
for more congested areas along with the circle. If
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people
give the
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driving
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test
yearly, it is a total waste of time for
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people
, the
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government
and management.
Furthermore
, one crucial cause of
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accidents
is alcohol and drugs. Young
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people
take drugs and alcohol during the
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driving
time, then they lose control on steering and it is a
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dangerous
occurrence for themselves and other
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people
.

To elucidate, while
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people
may vary in their opinion, I reckon that the
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government
should
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make
the best
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traffic
policies and
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people
are obligation to follow their guidelines.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
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