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Some people think that the amount of time we spend using the internet has a negative effect on social interaction, but other people feel that it opens up more possibilities for communication. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using the internet.

Some people think that the amount of time we spend using the internet has a negative effect on social interaction, but other people feel that it opens up more possibilities for communication. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using the internet. Wynq0
Without a doubt, the internet has become one of the most important and transformative technologies in modern history. Not only is it an exceptional communication tool, but it is also cost effective for most people. While the internet has positively changed the way we communicate, it also has some damaging effects for individuals and society. Prior to the internet, communication was limited to telephones, letters, faxes, or face to face if you were in the same area. This was quite often costly due to exorbitant telephone charges, if calling abroad, and high postage fees and wait times for letters to arrive. The internet solved those issues by allowing users to connect instantaneously with little to no cost. It has also opened the door for people, who do not always have time or the ability to physically meet one another, stay in contact via many of the social media applications on offer. As an expatriate living in Egypt it is hideously expensive to telephone friends and family in Australia. Not only is cost an issue, but the time difference is also a problem. However, with the advent of applications such as WhatsApp and Viber, I can leave my family messages at any time of the day, free of charge. Thus, ease of communication is possible due to the internet. Despite having many plus points, there is unfortunately a darker side to the internet. Due to the fact that internet access is easily accessible for most people, this connectivity is resulting in obsessive usage. It is a common occurrence in many homes these days that families sit in the same room for hours on end, never uttering a single word to each other. Why, because they are utterly obsessed with surfing the net, playing games or messaging friends online. We find that most people, myself included, find it nigh on impossible to put down our devices in case we ‘miss’ something. This addictive behaviour has started to result in a breakdown of social skills – we are in danger of losing our ability to effectively talk to one another face to face. To contemplate a world without the internet is something unimaginable. Society has gained a great deal since the internet’s inception, particularly in terms of ease of communication. However, although obsessive usage is problematic, people should control the time spent online; thus, minimising anti-social behaviour.
Without a doubt, the internet has become one of the most
important
and transformative technologies in modern history. Not
only
is it an exceptional
communication
tool,
but
it is
also
cost effective for most
people
. While the internet has
positively
changed
the way we communicate, it
also
has
some
damaging effects for individuals and society.

Prior to the internet,
communication
was limited
to telephones, letters, faxes, or face to face if you were in the same area. This was quite
often
costly due to exorbitant telephone charges, if calling abroad, and high postage fees and wait
times
for letters to arrive. The internet solved those issues by allowing users to connect
instantaneously
with
little
to no cost. It has
also
opened the door for
people
, who do not always have
time
or the ability to
physically
meet
one another, stay in contact via
many
of the social media applications on offer. As an expatriate living in Egypt it is
hideously
expensive to telephone friends and family in Australia. Not
only
is cost
an issue,
but
the
time
difference is
also
a problem.
However
, with the advent of applications such as WhatsApp and
Viber
, I can
leave
my family messages at any
time
of the day, free of charge.
Thus
,
ease
of
communication
is possible due to the internet.

Despite having
many
plus points, there is unfortunately a darker side to the internet. Due to the fact that internet access is
easily
accessible for most
people
, this connectivity is resulting in obsessive usage. It is a common occurrence in
many
homes these days that families sit in the same room for hours on
end
, never uttering a single word to each other. Why,
because
they are
utterly
obsessed with surfing the net, playing games or messaging friends online. We find that most
people
, myself included, find it nigh on impossible to put down our devices in case we ‘miss’ something. This addictive
behaviour
has
started
to result in a breakdown of social
skills
we are in
danger
of losing our ability to
effectively
talk to one another face to face.

To contemplate a world without the internet is something unimaginable. Society has gained a great deal since the internet’s inception,
particularly
in terms of
ease
of
communication
.
However
, although obsessive usage is problematic,
people
should control the
time
spent online;
thus
,
minimising
anti-social
behaviour
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the amount of time we spend using the internet has a negative effect on social interaction, but other people feel that it opens up more possibilities for communication. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using the internet.

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394 words
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