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Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the class Do you think is it the best way to deal with a disruptive child in the classroom What other solutions are there v.2

Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the class Do you think is it the best way to deal with a disruptive child in the classroom What other solutions are there v. 2
Acquisition of knowledge is only purpose pupils head for schools. However, by the groundbreaking attitude, some students break silence in classrooms and disturb their teachers and does not allow them to teach anything and other pupils suffers. In order to maintain adequate attitude in classes, some school of business suggest educators to send such students out of their respective classes. I believe that asking students to leave the classrooms is bigger mistake and there are other methods which should be used. Admittedly, maturity comes with the age and experience. At such a tender age, children do not know importance of education, however, teachers completely understand the value of education and making pupils to leave classrooms will decrease their grades and eventually, nation will suffer. Furthermore, such attitude from teachers can promote the behaviour of the students as they easily get a break from classes and they may get repetitive with interruptions. According to various surveys it is found that, students interrupt classes only in groups. In order to maintain the atmosphere in classes, educators can break such groups and this will be very effective to maintain silence. Afterthat, teachers can make disruptive students to stand at last of classroom so that education loss can not occur. Eventheless, school can arrange moral classes for such students and they can convey the same to their guardians so that they can ask their kids to behave properly in the classes. Having dwelled on such thoughts it is clear that asking students to leave classes is a temporary solution, while giving moral classes is permanent solution and should be adopted.
Acquisition of knowledge is
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only
purpose pupils head for schools.
However
, by the groundbreaking attitude,
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some
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students
break silence in classrooms and disturb their
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teachers
and does not
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allow
them to teach anything and other pupils suffers. In order to maintain adequate attitude in
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classes
,
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some
school of business suggest educators to
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send
such
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students
out of their respective
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
. I believe that asking
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students
to
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leave
the classrooms is bigger mistake and there are other methods which should be
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used
.

Admittedly
, maturity
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comes
with the age and experience. At such a tender age, children do not know importance of education,
however
,
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teachers
completely understand the value of education and making pupils to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
classrooms will decrease their grades and
eventually
, nation will suffer.
Furthermore
, such attitude from
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teachers
can promote the
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behaviour
of the
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students
as they
easily
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get
a break from
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
classes and
they may
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get
repetitive with interruptions.

According to various surveys it
is found
that,
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students
interrupt
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classes
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only
in groups. In order to maintain the atmosphere in
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classes
, educators can break such groups and this will be
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very
effective to maintain silence.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Afterthat
,
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teachers
can
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make
disruptive
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students
to stand at last of classroom
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so
that education loss can not occur.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Eventheless
, school can arrange moral
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
for such
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
students and
they can convey the same to their guardians
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so
that they can ask their kids to behave
properly
in the classes.

Having
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dwelled
on such thoughts it is
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clear
that asking
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students
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
is a temporary solution, while giving moral
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
is permanent solution and should
be adopted
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the class Do you think is it the best way to deal with a disruptive child in the classroom What other solutions are there v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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