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Some people think that teachers should be abke to ask the disruptive students to leave thr class.Do you think it id the best way yo deal with them?what other solutions are there?

Some people think that teachers should be abke to ask the disruptive students to leave thr class. Do you think it id the best way yo deal with them? what other solutions are there? BWjjV
Undoubtedly, a segment of society dim that mischievious pupils how to be ask to laugh to the classroom by teachers or mentors I do not consider it as one of the effective way to deal with such disruptive toddlers since there are several other methods to improve their behaviour rather than getting them out of class. This essay will examine some of the best possible solutions to tackle this worrying Trend. Needless to say, there are myriad of other options to deal with a pupil who creates disturbance while a teacher is teaching and the foremost one is that they should be in title to to strict punishments itself in the class as by asking them to leave may contribute in their studies to suffer further more child felt much more miserable if he is asked to go out of classroom and instead of improvement in his behaviour he might become much more stubborn in his bad attitude. Another causative reason for regarding the method of separating disruptive children from rest of class as not one of the best way into other options available to treat their mischievious behaviour. It can be testified with the help of an instance letting a child with bad behaviour to go out of class can deprive him from equal access to education opportunities despite he can be best treated by being fined or other penalties that might not affect his study. As a result, teachers should not be able to ask any mischievious pupils to go out of classroom as it would have a bad effect on their academic performance and their attitude. Every lock has a key, similarly adequate solutions should be implemented to curb this Trend. predominantly, there must be counselling sessions in each educational institution to treat disruptive students with appropriate punishments and guide them to have improvement in their behaviour. Secondly, teacher can impose other strict penalties instead of getting them out like ok making them stand for the rest of time and also by complaining their Guardians for there worse behaviour to be more precise they should be taught about moral values and basic manners. For example, how to act as a good and responsible student and to abide rules and regulations also there must be some efforts by mentors themselves to in calculate discipline among toddlers this problem can be handled by adopting above listed measures. To recapitulate even though making disruptive children to leave class is thought to be the best way to handle them however I disagree with this notion due to availability e off some other more effective solutions to improve mischievious behaviour of toddler
Undoubtedly
, a segment of society dim that
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mischievious
pupils how to be
Consider using a past participle here: "asked".
ask
to laugh to the classroom by
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teachers
or mentors I do not consider it as one of the effective way to deal with such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
disruptive
toddlers since there are several
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
methods to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their
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behaviour
rather
than getting them out of
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class
. This essay will examine
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some
of the
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best
possible solutions to tackle this worrying Trend.

Needless to say, there are myriad of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
options to deal with a pupil who creates disturbance while a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
is teaching and the foremost one is that they should be in title
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to to
strict punishments itself in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
as by asking them to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
may contribute in their studies to suffer
further
more child felt much more miserable if he
is asked
to go out of classroom and
instead
of improvement in his
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behaviour
he might become much more stubborn in his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
attitude. Another causative reason for regarding the method of separating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
disruptive
children from rest of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
as not one of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
best
way into
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
options available to treat their
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mischievious
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behaviour
. It can
be testified
with the
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help
of an instance letting a child with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
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behaviour
to go out of
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class
can
The usual collocation for "deprive" is "of" not "him". Did you mean "deprive him of"?
deprive him from
equal access to education opportunities despite he can be
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best
treated by
being fined
or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
penalties that might not affect his study.
As a result
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
should not be able to ask any
Possible spelling mistake found.
mischievious
pupils to go out of classroom as it would have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
effect on their academic performance and their attitude.

Every lock has a key,
similarly
adequate solutions should
be implemented
to curb this Trend.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
predominantly
, there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be counselling sessions in each educational institution to treat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
disruptive
students with appropriate punishments and guide them to have improvement in their
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
.
Secondly
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
can impose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
strict penalties
instead
of getting them out like ok making them stand for the rest of time and
also
by complaining their Guardians for there worse
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
to be more precise they should
be taught
about moral values and basic manners.
For example
, how to act as a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and responsible student and to abide
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations
also
there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
efforts by mentors themselves to in calculate discipline among toddlers this problem can
be handled
by adopting above listed measures.

To recapitulate
even though
making
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
disruptive
children to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
to be the
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best
way to handle them
however
I disagree with this notion due to availability e off
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
more effective solutions to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
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mischievious
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behaviour
of toddler
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IELTS essay Some people think that teachers should be abke to ask the disruptive students to leave thr class. Do you think it id the best way yo deal with them? what other solutions are there?

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