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Chocolate production in 3 countries

Chocolate production in 3 countries DaDJE

The picture illustrates how chocolate is produced. Overall, there are 9 steps to produce chocolate. The production start with grow coco tree and ripe red pods, then finishes with inner part pressed and liquid chocolate is produced. The first step begin with grow coco tree and ripe red pods in A. America, Africa, Indonesia. Subsequantly bark removes from pods, then bark removes from pods are fermented are spread in sun to dry. The dry pods are put in large sacks. After that the White cocoa beans transported by train or lorry. The transported pods are delivered to factory. Next step, beans are roasted. The roasted beans are crushed. In addition, outer shell removed. The last step contain with inner part pressed and liquid chocolate are ready for consuming.

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. The first
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pods
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are spread
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 in large sacks. After that the White cocoa beans transported by train or lorry. The transported You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcapsulehuskskin
pods
are delivered
 to factory. Next
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step
, beans are roasted
. The roasted beans are crushed
. In addition
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 contain with inner part pressed and liquid chocolate are ready for consuming. 