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Some people think that teacher should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1

Some people think that teacher should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. v. 1
In the growth of the children, the role of the teachers is more important than others, but some folks consider that the duty of a professor is limited to providing the academic knowledge only. However, others think that the teacher should help the pupils in order to learn about the right and the wrong decisions. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints along with the opinion. To begin with, the people who are in the favour that the teachers are responsible to teach the students about their behaviour, have a great evidence for this. They admit that the instructor plays a vital role in the life of a student, because the student can learn better from the educator about critical situations in the life rather than consult with the parents. For example, in this hectic era, the parents do not have enough time to teach their kids in a better way with real life situations, but a lecturer is always there for their learners to show them the right path. So, due to this reason these people believe that is is much better for the pupils to learn from their teachers rather than grabbing incorrect information in the absence of their parents. On the other hand, some of them consider that the responsibility of the supervisor is to help the students only in the study related situations. Because, they think that to show the right and wrong things to the kids is a duty of their parents, they can learn those things better from their parents. For example, if a tutor, mainly focuses on the real life situations than, the learners might feel distracted from the study and they will enjoy to discuss their real life problems with their teachers. Overall, in this situation, the pupils might waste their time or maybe they can spend their time in the study appropriately. To conclude, this essay discussed whether the role of the teacher is limited to the academic or not. In my opinion, I think the teachers should help their learners to understand the academics as well as real life problems also.
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should
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help
the pupils in order to
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learn
about the right and the
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wrong
decisions. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints along with the opinion.

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people
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favour
that the
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teachers
are responsible to teach the
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students
about their
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behaviour
, have a great evidence for this. They admit that the instructor plays a vital role in the
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life
of a
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student
,
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the
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student
can
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learn
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better
from the educator about critical
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situations
in the
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life
rather
than consult with the
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parents
.
For example
, in this hectic era, the
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parents
do not have
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enough
time to teach their kids in a
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better
way with
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real
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life
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situations
,
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but
a lecturer is always there for their learners to
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show
them the right path.
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people
believe that
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is is
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better
for the pupils to
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learn
from their
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teachers
rather
than grabbing incorrect information in the absence of their parents.

On the other hand
,
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some
of them consider that the responsibility of the supervisor is to
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help
the
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students
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only
in the study related
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situations
.
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, they
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that to
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the right and
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wrong
things to the kids is a duty of their
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parents
, they can
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learn
those things
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better
from their
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parents
.
For example
, if a tutor,
mainly
focuses on the
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real
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life
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situations
than, the learners might feel distracted from the
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study and
they will
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enjoy to discuss
their
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real
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life
problems with their
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teachers
.
Overall
, in this
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situation
, the pupils might waste their time or maybe they can spend their time in the study
appropriately
.

To conclude
, this essay discussed whether the role of the
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teacher
is limited
to the academic or not. In my opinion, I
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think
the
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teachers
should
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help
their learners to understand the academics
as well
as
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real
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life
problems
also
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that teacher should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
351 words
7.5
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