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Some people think that studying abroad is useful. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that studying abroad is useful. 7rl02
I agree. I think that stadying abroad is useful. Because if you want to be successful in the future, find a well paying job, or own bisiness, then soudying abroad is the best way to achieve these goals. As we all know in developed countries the educational process, teaching methods and technologies are also very well developed. Most international students are forced to live alone or with strangers. This contributes to the more rapid development of the individual in independ life. Classmates of international students will also be students from different parts of the world. This helps them develap cuultural tolerance and get along quickly with people of different and ethnicities. Most people will have business ideas and plans. But not everyone is able to find a partner and is forced to abandon their plans, Most students studying abroad rarely face such problems, In addition to studying abroad, students studying abroad have a wide range of apportunities to gain work experince
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IELTS essay Some people think that studying abroad is useful.

Essay
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1 paragraphs
160 words
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