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Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.2

In the present age, whether single-sex schools provide more benefits than mixed schools has sparked much debate. Some people assert that students in single-sex schools have better academic achievements, whereas many others argue that mixed schools offer students better social skills for their future. Personally, I am in favour of the latter view. Convincing arguments can be made that mixed schools provide a more comprehensive learning environment for children. To start with, students studying at mixed schools have more chances to communicate with members of the opposite sex. In other words, children learn how to talk to the other gender at an early age; therefore, their social skills would certainly be fostered. Moreover, mixed schools give students opportunities to deal with conflicts with the other gender, which strengthens students’ problem-solving skills. For instance, when a boy has a conflict with a girl at school, both of them must learn how to cope. This lesson must be learned sooner or later; as a result, students benefit more if they can learn it sooner. Lastly, mixed schools provide students with a real-life scenario where both genders co-exist. Specifically, students are able to learn in an organic environment in which boys and girls must know how to interact with each other. Admittedly, single-sex schools have fewer distractions. The reason for this is if a school only has boys or girls, students would not be distracted by members of the opposite sex at school; hence, they can focus on their learning. Even so, these students still have access to the other gender after school, which means in reality, they must meet the other gender anyway. Consequently, the benefits of single-sex schools are quite limited. In summary, I would concede that single-sex schools have some advantages. Despite that, mixed schools certainly support students in a much better way. Overall, I am convinced that students should go to mixed schools
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assert that
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in single-sex
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have

better academic achievements, whereas
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others argue that
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offer

students better social
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for their future.
Personally
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Convincing arguments can
be made
that
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provide a more comprehensive

learning environment for children. To
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with,
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studying at
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have more

chances to communicate with members of the opposite sex. In
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words, children learn

how to talk to the
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gender at an early age;
therefore
, their social
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would
certainly
be fostered
.
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give
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opportunities to deal with conflicts with the

other gender, which strengthens
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problem-solving
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.
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, both of them
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learn how to cope. This lesson
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sooner or later;
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benefit more if they can learn it sooner.
Lastly
,
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provide
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with a real-life scenario where both genders co-exist.
Specifically
,
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students
are able to learn in an organic environment in which boys and girls
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know how to interact with each other.

Admittedly
, single-sex
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have fewer distractions.
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if a school

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only
has boys or girls,
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would not
be distracted
by members of the opposite sex at

school;
hence
, they can focus on their learning. Even
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, these
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still
have access to the
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gender after
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, which means in reality, they
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must
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the
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gender anyway.
Consequently
, the benefits of single-sex
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are quite limited.

In summary, I would concede that single-sex
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have
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advantages. Despite

that,
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certainly
support
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in a much better way.
Overall
, I
am convinced
that
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students
should go to
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IELTS essay Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life.

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