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Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people. What do you think about this viewpoint? v.2

Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people. What do you think about this viewpoint? v. 2
with the passage of time, various lodgings has become available for travelling people. However, some persons believe that it is not helpful in learning about the country and inhabitants. In my viewpoint, staying in hotel can be both good and bad depending on aesthetics and workings of the place. As for why people think it is not a good idea to stay in the hotel, there are umpteen reasons. The main one is that most of the tourist dwelling of present day are matched with the needs of worldwide public than host country environment which contributes to less awareness of the nations uniqueness. For instance, 5 star hotels in India often constructed while keeping the needs of worldwide audience in mind which leaves little space for cultural and traditional things. However, I do not completely agree with this notion as there are some suits which help to keep the uniqueness of culture and traditions of the country. A fine example of this is Ryokan - a traditional Japanese inn which typically features tatami-matted rooms, communal baths and several other facilities such as allowing people to wear national cloth (Yukata) and so on. In addition, it is much easier to live in a hotel with colleagues and fellow tourists then the native people who are stranger to every traveller. Beside this, there are many other ways of gaining knowledge about the country and its indigenous population like visiting historical places, meeting native people, reading books and etcetera. To end, whether to stay in the hotel or the live-in facilities provided by native people, it is a persons choice than the public. As, everyone feel comfort in different environments.
with
the passage of time, various lodgings has become available for travelling
people
.
However
,
some
persons believe that it is not helpful in learning about the
country
and inhabitants. In my viewpoint, staying in
hotel
can be both
good
and
bad
depending on aesthetics and workings of the place.

As for why
people
think
it is not a
good
idea
to stay in the
hotel
, there are umpteen reasons. The main one is that most of the tourist dwelling of present day
are matched
with the needs of worldwide
public
than host
country
environment which contributes to less awareness of the
nations
uniqueness.
For instance
,
5 star
hotels
in India
often
constructed while keeping the needs of worldwide audience in mind which
leaves
little
space for cultural and traditional things.

However
, I do not completely
agree
with this notion as there are
some
suits which
help
to
keep
the uniqueness of culture and traditions of the
country
. A fine example of this is
Ryokan
-
a traditional Japanese inn which
typically
features tatami-matted rooms, communal baths and several other facilities such as allowing
people
to wear national cloth (
Yukata
) and
so
on.
In addition
, it is much easier to
live
in a
hotel
with colleagues and fellow tourists then the native
people
who are stranger to every
traveller
. Beside this, there are
many
other ways of gaining knowledge about the
country
and its indigenous population like visiting historical places, meeting native
people
, reading books and etcetera.

To
end
, whether to stay in the
hotel
or the
live
-in facilities provided by native
people
, it is a persons
choice
than the public.
As
, everyone
feel
comfort in
different
environments.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people. What do you think about this viewpoint? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
5.5
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