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Some people think that some individuals are naturally good leaders while others think individuals can learn leadership skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that some individuals are naturally good leaders while others think individuals can learn leadership skills. dDLWd
Leading others can be seen as some of the most demanding skill in the world, while good leaders are worshipped, bad ones are ridiculed, a risky job overall. There are peers who think that individuals need god’s gift to succeed in this field, others think that it sometimes is a fruit of labor (learning). In this essay, both views will be discussed and a final verdict will be provided. On the one hand, talent can be inferred as a considerable factor but should not to an extent that the bearer is to control people effectively at the start. Most gifted are the way they are because of their surroundings since birth such as parents and friends, however, it can only be considered as a raw material, in other words, a bark with yet a bite, and they need to be nurtured enough to be regarded as a prodigy or a genius. Due to the need of recognition in today’s society, most guardians or adults tend to over-exaggerate the context, resulting in more misleads and forming standards that is thought to be outdated nowadays in order to benefit one’s own fame. For example, a class monitor may have the ability to lead the class well like it is a second nature, but they are incomparable to the responsibility of doing it on a company or regional scale that needs some form of training or a certain amount of experience to do, like day and night. On the other hand, earning leadership mastery seems more viable and practical than waiting for something good to arrive. At the present, there are too many so-called talented individuals that the population no longer give a lick of care since anybody, given the circumstances, can study to be what they wish, it is just more time consuming than those who took a head start. Great success can be achieved if hard work is poured into, without the need of a booster in the name of gifts. It can be applied in commanding, if a person has knowledge and experience, they can even guide a whole nation. Most politicians we see on TV are not born governments but normies that climbed their way up like the retired US president B. Obama, someone that was affiliated with some social vices while young and still came out to be an influential figure. In conclusion, no one can become a good boss right before coming out of the cradle and the ungifted can also learn such abilities provided that time is with them. It should also be noted that studying is also a mean to make better of something peers already have.
Leading others can be
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seen
as
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some
of the most demanding
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skill
in the world, while
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good
leaders are
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worshipped
,
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bad
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ones
are ridiculed
, a risky job
overall
. There are peers who
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think
that individuals
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need
god’s gift to succeed in this field, others
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think
that it
The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
sometimes is
a fruit of labor (learning). In this essay, both views will
be discussed
and a final verdict will
be provided
.

On the one hand, talent can
be inferred
as a considerable factor
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but
should not to an extent that the bearer is to control
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people
effectively
at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
. Most gifted are the way they are
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because
of their surroundings since birth such as parents and friends,
however
, it can
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only
be considered
as a raw material, in
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other
words, a bark with
yet
a bite, and they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to
be nurtured
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enough
to
be regarded
as a prodigy or a genius. Due to the
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need
of recognition in
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today
’s society, most guardians or adults tend to
Consider using "exaggerate".
over-exaggerate
the context, resulting in more misleads and forming standards
that is
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thought
to
be outdated
nowadays in order to benefit one’s
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own
fame.
For example
, a
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class
monitor may have the ability to lead the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
well like it is a second nature,
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but
they are incomparable to the responsibility of doing it on a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
or regional scale that
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needs
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some
form of training or a certain amount of experience to do, like day and night.

On the
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other
hand, earning leadership mastery seems more viable and practical than waiting for something
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good
to arrive. At the present, there are too
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many
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so
-called talented individuals that the population no longer give a lick of care since anybody,
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given
the circumstances, can study to be what they wish, it is
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just
more
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
time consuming
than those who took a head
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start
. Great success can
be achieved
if
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work
is poured
into, without the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
of a booster in the name of gifts. It can
be applied
in commanding, if a person has knowledge and experience, they can even guide a whole nation. Most politicians we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
on TV are not born
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governments
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but
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normies
that climbed their way up like the retired US president B. Obama, someone that
was affiliated
with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
social vices while young and
still
came out to be an influential figure.

In conclusion
, no one can become a
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good
boss right
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before
coming out of the cradle and the
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ungifted
can
also
learn such abilities provided that time is with them. It should
also
be noted
that studying is
also
a mean to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
better of something peers already have.
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IELTS essay Some people think that some individuals are naturally good leaders while others think individuals can learn leadership skills.

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4 paragraphs
442 words
6.0
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