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Some people think that school is a right place to learn while others believe that parent

Some people think that school is a right place to learn while others believe that parent Q8O93
Behavior of people reflect the personality on society. It is true that quite people think that parent should tech the children how to good member of society but there is a strong counter argument of other people that school is a right place to learn. However I discuss in light of serval factor and any conclusion write. To begin with, it is generally believd that parent should guid the children how to deal with society. This is mainly because children will execute the words of parent rather than the teacher. In my books, parent are first teachers. Parents should basic qualities like respect, obedience, honesty and so on. Parent should teach those qualities at an early night age so that their children consume these qualities into them. For instance, my uncle's daughter is just studying in 2nd grade, but she respects the elderly people. Since their parents taught her the qualities which she must includeing in her. Moreover, parent is a closest friends of your children so children and can easily told the their personal problem and parent can easily explained. Furthermore, parent is a better known about you children, what is your strength and weakness. On the other hand, there are certain group of people loudly contend that school is the right place to learn how to be a good member of society. Firstly, in school taught the acamdamic education related for example, corrsponding the academic subject. Secondly, nowadays, children are not having sufficient time to spend with their parents because both of the parents must be employed or they keep their child in hostel so few people think school is better. Thus, it is evident from all discussion that, both the argument have own significance. But I personally believe parents is Better teaching the how to be good member of society.
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. It is true that quite
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people
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that
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parent
should tech the
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how to
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but
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is a right place to learn.
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factor and any conclusion write.

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the
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children
will execute the words of
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rather
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are
first
teachers.
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Parents
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qualities
like respect, obedience, honesty and
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on.
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should teach those
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at an early night age
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that their
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children
consume these
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into them.
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, my uncle's daughter is
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just
studying in 2nd grade,
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but
she respects the elderly
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people
.
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taught her the
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is
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children
and can
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.
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,
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, what is your strength and weakness.

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loudly
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is the right place to learn how to be a
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.
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taught the
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acamdamic
education related
for example
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the academic subject.
Secondly
, nowadays,
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are not having sufficient time to spend with their
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parents
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parents
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employed or
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their child in hostel
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school
is better.

Thus
, it is evident from all discussion that, both the argument have
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significance.
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is Better teaching
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IELTS essay Some people think that school is a right place to learn while others believe that parent

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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