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Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. NEnq
First and foremost, robots are programmed and constructed to perform the works as efficient as men. As a consequence, humans become idle and they would not nurture and develop in their intelligence quotient and their physique. Besides that, there are cases in which sometimes people instruct the machines to perform illegal and unethical activities. Such situations are hazardous to individuals as well as the properties. On the contrary, robots are productive because they are been installed with programmes that make them productive and efficient to complete the tasks in short span of time. It reduces the time and energy that a person spends for completing the work. As a result many fields like medicine and engineering make use of such machines to reduce their work and labour.
First
and foremost, robots
are programmed
and constructed to perform the works as efficient as
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men
. As a consequence, humans become
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idle and
they would not nurture and develop in their intelligence quotient and their physique.
Besides
that, there are cases in which
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sometimes
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people
instruct the machines to perform illegal and unethical activities. Such situations are hazardous to individuals
as well
as the properties.
On the contrary
, robots are productive
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because
they
are been
installed with
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programmes
that
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make
them productive and efficient to complete the tasks in short span of time. It
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reduces
the time and energy that a person spends for completing the work.
As a result
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many
fields like medicine and engineering
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make
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use
of such machines to
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reduce
their work and
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labour
.

IELTS essay Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society.

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