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Some people think that people can have better travel experience of the travelling guided tours while other team travelling alone is better alternative discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think that people can have better travel experience of the travelling guided tours while other team travelling alone is better alternative discuss both views and give your opinion 1nNPX
It is thought by some individuals the travellers would have a great experience if they would travel with guided tours where other people believe the travelling alone has better experience I personally believe that cater to school have a social discuss both use of my opinion and instances in the coming days On the one hand, the reason behind why some people think travelling with guided tours have better travel experience is that guided tours has proper information like importance, shortcuts etc of particular location. For instance, a number of visitors visit at the most eminent monument Taj Mahal and travellers can enjoy their trip more better when they have companionship of guided travel who can make their tour at the main places of monuments as well as they know very well about the shortcut paths of the destination which can help the travellers to save their time. Thus, a better experience they can feel with guided tools On the other hand, the reason why other think travelling alone is better is that some people has introvert nature who do not feel much comfortable with others so when they will travel in the various places alone it will give them a sense of satisfaction and they can visit according to their expenditure, time like some places need entry tickets or extra cost for rides and food which everyone cannot afford as well as some people like to travel places in evening time as a result if people will travel alone they can visit according to their comfort zone without any boundaries. In conclusion, although travelling alone provide comfort zone to travellers but in my opinion for making the trip exciting and interesting guided with tours plays much crucial role.
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IELTS essay Some people think that people can have better travel experience of the travelling guided tours while other team travelling alone is better alternative discuss both views and give your opinion

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  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
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