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Some people think that paying regular tax is enough to contribute to society . Other argue that being a citizen there are more responsibility as well as to fulfill

Some people think that paying regular tax is enough to contribute to society. Other argue that being a citizen there are more responsibility as well as to fulfill 2RP96
In today's world its our social role to contribute to development our society by paying tax regularly not only that its our fundamental duty to contribute more to our society by means of social work. To start with taxation is the main pillar of any country's progress and economic growth in addition to it, if tax is paid by every citizen then country's living standad is also affected further more some think what tariff help then if they pay it answers is very simple that payer's of it get many benefits form the side of government beacuse they are payer's due to then funds for public help can be generated added that if their are no tariff payer their is no progress so it everyone's regular duty to pay it. To initiate with their are some other people what they feel is not only paying duty is their responsibility but also helping society in any way is also their responsibility in addition to it, if people only pay duty to authority but not look at the social welfare then that duty is going to get waste. For example if a person pays custom regularly but ignore that where it is used, what change does it make in society to get positive results as well as does only custom paying fulfill all social responsibility of helping others, keep place clean or any other things. In my opinion if people pay excise regularly then also should not forget there other duties as a citizen of country further more only excise paying will never help any country to get developed but citizen fufilling there fundamental duties towards society will always create a developed country. It can be concluded that paying levy is duty but its not overs their to get delighted result everyone should perform there social duties. Thus it can be said that what tax payers think that their responsibility is over after paying it but the real see is that after that point there real responsibility begins.
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paying
tax
regularly
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our fundamental
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society
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work.

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with taxation is the main pillar of any country's progress and economic growth
in addition
to it, if tax
is paid
by every citizen then country's living
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think
what tariff
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then if they
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pay
it answers is
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simple that payer's of it
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get
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government
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beacuse
they are payer's due to then funds for public
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can
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is no progress
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to
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pay
it.

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people
what they feel is not
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only
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paying
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duty
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responsibility
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also
helping
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society
in any way is
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their
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responsibility
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to it, if
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people
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pay
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to authority
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welfare then that
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duty
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waste.
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if a person
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pays
custom
regularly
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does it
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in
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to
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results
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as does
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custom
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fulfill all
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responsibility
of helping others,
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keep
place clean or any
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other
things.

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people
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pay
excise
regularly
then
also
should not forget there
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other
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duties
as a citizen of country
further
more
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only
excise
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paying
will never
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help
any country to
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get
developed
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but
citizen
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fufilling
there fundamental
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duties
towards
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society
will always create a
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developed country
.

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be concluded
that
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paying
levy is
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duty
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but
its not overs their to
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get
delighted result everyone should perform there
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social
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duties
.
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Thus
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be said
that what tax payers
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think
that their
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responsibility
is over after
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paying
it
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but
the real
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see
is that after that point there real
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responsibility
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begins
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IELTS essay Some people think that paying regular tax is enough to contribute to society. Other argue that being a citizen there are more responsibility as well as to fulfill

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
336 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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