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First, the cans need to be taken from sorting bins to special collection centers instead of being thrown away with the standard refuse. The cans are collected from here and delivered to a factory where they're first sorted then cleaned. Next, the cans are cleaned and sorted after that it crushed and compressed in special machine. The metal is then heated to a high enough temperature to allow the aluminum to melt. Then metal extended flat to a thickness of between 2. 5mm and 6 mm. After that aluminum is now ready to be recycled into new packaging, like drink containers. Finally, the new cans are delivered to a soft drinks factory where they're filled. The cans can now be sold to the final public and reused. In the UK, 74 per cent of all aluminum cans that are sold are recycled.

First
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
 need to be taken
 from sorting bins to special collection centers instead
 of being thrown
 away with the standard refuse.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are collected
 from here and delivered to a factory where they're first
 sorted then cleaned.

Next
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are cleaned
 and sorted after that it crushed and compressed in special machine.

The metal is then heated to a high This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 temperature to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 the aluminum to melt.

Then metal extended flat to a thickness of between 2. Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "5 mm"5 mm
5mm
 and 6 mm. After that aluminum is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 ready to be recycled
 into new packaging, like drink containers.

Finally
, the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are delivered
 to a soft Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "drinks'" or "drink's"?drinks'drink's
drinks
 factory where they're filled.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
be sold
 to the final public and reused. In the UK, 74 per cent of all aluminum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
 that are sold
are recycled
. 