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Is it true against of the past, nowadays majors are divided to small parts and they have their own science, so, in this way some people believe that schools should to teach students about science of food and preparing foods, while, some people have this sight which the students should the learn substantial lessons. In my view, most of the school time must be allocate to the principal lessons like math and science. In this essay I will consider both of sights. Studying the principal lessons like math and science or other lessons in schools is very essential which first students familiar with different knowledge and second influence on their career in future, for instance when I was in highschool I entered a world of science and I noticed it will be suitable as my major, in addition, learning from basic of lessons can be effect on each job for instance one shopkeeper should know about calculating and basic math for her occupation or as be electrician you need to know basic information from psychics. Interesting activities in schools are very significant and helpful for powering the minds of students, for instance one of these activity is learning about science of food and preparing meal because if they learn about science of food, they know about the sugar, calories and salt of various foods or disadvantages of eating junk foods and it causes they would learn how to choose the best and healthy food for own in breaking times. In other hand, learning to preparing the meal can be delicious and amazing experience for them due to despite of tasting the new taste they learn how to cooperation together and be a one team, for example I remembered in school sometimes we do this and on those period I learned a lot of things from my friends, also, we ate our food with our teachers and it was very memorable. As a result, every lesson and activity impacts the main field of students in future, so, both of them are to be considered in the school schedule but in my view specific lessons demand more attention
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Studying the principal
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highschool
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world of
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and I noticed it will be suitable as my major,
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from basic of
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can be effect on each job
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one shopkeeper

should know about calculating and basic math for her occupation or as be

electrician you need to know basic information from psychics.

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food and preparing meal
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, they know

about the sugar, calories and salt of various
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foods and it causes they would learn how to choose the best and healthy
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in breaking times. In other hand, learning to preparing the meal can be delicious

and amazing experience for them due to
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how to cooperation together and be a one team,
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school
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with our teachers and it was
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IELTS essay principal lessons in school

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
355 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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